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Article posted January 20, 2012 at 04:31 PM GMT0 •
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Kyle
Ms.Transue
9TH CP English
9 January 2012
SCARY STORY
Bang Snapp!!! As the marry go round turns. In the book Something Wicked This Way Comes there are more scary things that happen. I personally think that the 3 scariest things about this book are the Carnival, Mr.dark, and The Marry Go Round. They all are scary in a special way. Some scarier than other you be the judge.
The first thing I will talk about is the carnival. This is the whole operation of scary. One way it is sketchy is that It came to the town at three am (Bradbury 24). Yeah that’s not weird or anything. Oh and I almost forgot it steals peoples SOULS! Hard to believe but it is true. The way it steals the souls is turn people’s misory into depression.
This person im about to talk about is just bad all around scary dude. His name is Mr. Dark now what do you think about people with names like that EVIL! He is evil in many ways he owns that creepy carnival. He also wants to kill will because he is on to Mr. darks plan. Because he is the person who is in charge about taking the souls of little kids.
The next thing is the marry go round. This carnival ride made for fun. It is really a bad thing. It makes you go back to look like a kid or grow up into an adult. (Chapter 23 Mr. .cougar carnival) Ms. Foley rode the ride and it made her turn into a little kid again. Mr. Cougar wants to ride it to make himself older.
That is why I think that this story is more of a scary story.
Works Cited
Bradbury, Ray. Something Wicked This Way Comes. New York, NY: William Morrow, 1962.
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Article posted January 20, 2012 at 04:31 PM GMT0 •
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Article posted December 14, 2011 at 04:32 PM GMT0 •
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GREEN. RED. SILVER: December Freewrite
GREEN. RED. SILVER. What do these colors remind you of? December is the best month in the whole year. For one reason only Christmas YAY!!! I cant wait to be with all my family doing fun stuff. Like Christmas dinner, jokes with the family and other fun stuff. Oh and u can’t forget about the presents. But the best part is defiantly waking up mom at 5 A.M in the morning. She always says one thing every year make me coffee. But me and my sister pretty much know to make coffee before we wake her up works every time.
I have some presents that I’m making in wood shop for my mom and uncle. See my uncle is a big time hunter so I thought I would make him a European Mount for his horns. And for my mom I made here a clock it took me forever to make. I had to sand every day. And make everything perfect. I also made her a heart stand I’m almost done with it. I hope you all have a merry Christmas.ry Christmas.
Article posted December 14, 2011 at 04:32 PM GMT0 •
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