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The next day after breakfast I went to my Aunt’s house. My mom picked me up that morning around ten. When we were going there I was playing my DS the whole ride to my Aunt’s house. Then we arrived.
Then they took me to the city me only without my mom, sister, and brother. First they took me to a souvenir shop. My mom gave me 60$. I bought a crystal sculpture thing of the twin towers. I also bought a model of the empire state building, with a toy of King Kong on it. Then we went to the Empire State Building. It was very cool. We took a train ride home, and the way there.
Later we went to see the radio street Christmas show. It was a lot of fun, because it looked like the people were doing a lot of cool stuff. When it was over we went home. I played my DS. I slept over at their house.