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Halloween story (10/30/07)
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Write a 1-2 paragraph story (fantasy) on a Halloween idea, submitted by 10/31, with <4 errors in conventions.
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The haunted house
Article posted November 2, 2007 at 10:51 PM GMT0 •
comment (4) • Reads 7862
by Adam
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Once upon a time there was a kid named Adam and his friend named William and they weren’t scared of nothing. It was Halloween night. Adam and William were stealing little kids Halloween candy when this guy pushed Adam to the ground. Then William pushed the guy to the ground. Then they started to kick him. They left him there. He was out cold for an hour. His brother found him on the street. He almost got ran over. He got off the street. His brother asks him what happened he said nothing his brother slapped him the face. Then he starts to cry. That’s when he started to tell him. These kids said, “You guys think you’re scared of nothing. Go to that house right there”. ”All right” said Adam “wait" said William. “Is that a haunted house?” said William. Yes, I thought you guys weren’t scared of nothing. Ok!! Then their friend Colton came in the conversation. He said. “get it over it ok”!! So they went in the house. They did different things to pass the time. Adam took a nap. William played ping-pong with Colton. Adam heard something whispering "Die". He went to William and Colton. Adam said "did you guys hear that”. They said yes. Then they it heard again. Adam remembered that he had brought his guns with him. Then they saw it. It looks like it was burned to death.
To be continued
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Article posted November 2, 2007 at 10:51 PM GMT0 •
comment (4) • Reads 7862
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On Halloween Night
Article posted October 30, 2007 at 08:05 PM GMT0 •
comment (2) • Reads 1851
by Kaitlin
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Once upon a time there were three little girls named Jade, Haley, and Kaitlin and two little boys named William, and Alec. They were all really good friends so they went trick or treating together. They also went by themselves. There was a creepy house. The boys went ahead but Alec stayed back with the girls. William didn’t look back so he didn’t know that every one stayed back. Kaitlin, Haley, Jade, and Alec thought that William was right behind them so they went to another house. They left William. DUN DUN dun!!!.
There was a cute little house that wasn’t that scary so they went trick or treating there. But inside was mad scary. When they were at the door and four evil witches grabbed them one buy one. They locked them in the basement which was filled with blood and skulls of dead skeletons. You could hear them laughing from thinking of their evil plots they would do to the poor children. But William was doing fine. Turns out that his friend lived there. He had a candy bag almost filled to the top he also got a nice visit. He went back outside. He noticed that Haley, Jade, Kaitlin, and Alec they were not there. He walked along the sidewalk but then he saw the cute little house. He knew they went inside because he saw their candy on the grass. He knocked on the door. They grabbed William, they threw him in the basement. They were so happy to see each other. They saw an open window. They all walked toward it and climbed out it.
THEY HAD A HAPPY HALLOWEEN
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Article posted October 30, 2007 at 08:05 PM GMT0 •
comment (2) • Reads 1851
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The funny halloween story
Article posted October 30, 2007 at 08:14 PM GMT0 •
comment (1) • Reads 1696
by Ryder
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Once upon a time there was a boy named Milk. He was ten years old. He could not wait because today was Halloween. He was going to be a Bob the Builder. He could not wait because he loved Bob the Builder. It was his favorite book. It was Halloween today. He had to go to school. He was getting his Bob the Builder costume on. He went to school.
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Article posted October 30, 2007 at 08:14 PM GMT0 •
comment (1) • Reads 1696
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The Headless Horse Man
Article posted October 30, 2007 at 08:11 PM GMT0 •
comment (3) • Reads 1990
by Katherine
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Sleepy Hollow and The Headless Horse Man
By Katherine
There is a small town that is called Sleepy Hollow. For many ancient times this little town has been haunted by ghosts and goblins but the most fearsome of all is the Headless Horse man!
There was a man whose name was Icabod Crane. He was a school teacher who claimed that he wasn’t afraid of any thing at all!
One day a girl came to town. She was a beautiful girl, her name was Saurian. By one blink Icabod felt as if he was in love! Saurian felt as she was in love as well!
One day Icabod came with flowers and asked for a date, but instead she gave him a Halloween dance party invitation. So Icabod went to the party and danced with Saurian but another man told a story of the Headless Horse Man that was the true story!
That night Icabod rode his horse through the spooky woods he heard a evil laughing sound. It was the Headless Horse Man! Icabod ran and ran as fast as he could! But still the Headless Horse Man was still there! There was a bridge that if you go over it the Horse man will not get you! Icabod went over the brig but the Headless Horse man throw a burning pumpkin at Icabod! No one knows what happened to Icabod Crane some think that he got took by the Headless Horse Man but some don't.The End
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Article posted October 30, 2007 at 08:11 PM GMT0 •
comment (3) • Reads 1990
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The Spooky Forest
Article posted October 29, 2007 at 08:08 PM GMT0 •
comment (5) • Reads 1868
by Laurel
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There once was a boy that lived by a dark forest. Every day when he went to town he would say “there are monsters living in there”. And everybody agreed. One day the boy moved. A girl moved in. She was very brave. She rarely went to town so she didn’t know that there were monsters in the forest. One day she went into the forest to pick berries. But no one ever saw her again.
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Article posted October 29, 2007 at 08:08 PM GMT0 •
comment (5) • Reads 1868
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HALLOWEEN STORY
Article posted November 2, 2007 at 10:49 PM GMT0 •
comment (1) • Reads 1876
by Dalila
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ONCE my cousin and I went to a haunted house and we went in side. My cousin was scared. She went back out side and I stayed in side and I went to a hole and fell and I was holding by the edge of the hole. I couldn’t hold any more so I fell and there was spiders all over me and I ran. All the doors were locked so a man was behind me and he opened the door with a key and he said run so I ran and I went back home.
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Article posted November 2, 2007 at 10:49 PM GMT0 •
comment (1) • Reads 1876
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The Curse of Camp Cold Lake
Article posted October 30, 2007 at 07:59 PM GMT0 •
comment • Reads 1469
by Kelsey
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I don’t want to go sorry. I’m Sara. I don’t like water. I like swimming in clean water sometimes but not every day or in dirty lakes I just don’t. My Mom and dad forced me to go, they said it will be a good thing for me.
Yeah right like that will happen. Well I went when we had cabins I was not happy.
The windows were shattered. There were spider webs and spiders. I hate spiders.
I knew this was the wrong place for me when I saw my room mates. I knew this is the wrong place for me when I went to the lake, there were bugs in it. I drowned. I was in the camp again. I said, "Is anybody here?" I went toward a cabin. I saw a girl. I said, "Delah". She tried to kill a person last year. Suddenly a kid pulled me out of the water. I spit some water out of my mouth. That night two girls slipped a snake down my back. I screamed. The next morning it was time to get picked up. I went home. I was glad to be home. I was happy to see my family again.
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Article posted October 30, 2007 at 07:59 PM GMT0 •
comment • Reads 1469
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The Story of Some Men
Article posted November 1, 2007 at 10:19 PM GMT0 •
comment (1) • Reads 1696
by William
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Once there were five men. Their names where Holden, William, Adam, Evan, and Colton. They lived together. They weren’t afraid of anything. Holden and William were not asleep. All the others were. Then we heard a knock on the door. We went down stairs. When we opened the door we ran because there was a guy with a bloody axe. We woke up the guys. We told them what had happened. There was a knock on our door. We didn’t open. We heard a thud he threw the axe at the door. Adam opened it. He had bad teeth. Adam screamed to death and closed the door. He said, “Let’s get out of here”. I said, "We can’t he’s blocking the door. Evan, William remember your paintball guns. Holden you have a bb gun. This is the plan we shoot him in the head and run. We will get a ride from Lillie, ok? Let’s go”.
Ten minutes later. "We did it Lillie, lets go. Where are we going. I don’t know where to go. Holden where do you want to go?” “Boston", he said. “Ok. Lillie take us to Boston. We will be there by dawn". At dawn we went to the store. It was silent at first. We looked around we looked every where. We got some paintball guns and bb guns. “Where do we go? All the motels are taken. We need to go in the woods for tonight ok. Someone guard tonight."
The next morning we saw him again. We ran until we went to a stop because we were at an edge. Lillie jumped off because she was scared. But she had a parachute. Then she landed in the water and took it off.
To be continued…..
William
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Article posted November 1, 2007 at 10:19 PM GMT0 •
comment (1) • Reads 1696
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Halloween night
Article posted November 2, 2007 at 10:42 PM GMT0 •
comment (2) • Reads 1732
by Kayla
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When the night came all the little boys and girls went trick or treating door by door.
Then came a castle. An old witch was making the sky dark and windy. One night a kid came to the old witch. Of course he didn’t know she was a witch, he said, “trick or treat” She said, “I hate Halloween” and he ran away. Next came a teenager and kicked her in to the pot.
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Article posted November 2, 2007 at 10:42 PM GMT0 •
comment (2) • Reads 1732
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THE HAUNTED HOUSE.
Article posted October 30, 2007 at 07:59 PM GMT0 •
comment • Reads 1278
by Marcela
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Once there lived a young boy named John. He always said he was not afraid of any thing. One day his friend told him there was a haunted house on 10th street. He said that it was not real. Really his friend told him. John didn’t believe what his friend said to him. When it was midnight he thought about the haunted house. Then he said,” I think he’s lying to make me scared”. One day he passed by the haunted house. He looked at it for a minute. Then he thought, ”should I go in or should I not?” He said, to himself. Then he said “I’ll go in.” Then he felt something tap on his shoulder. He turned around but he didn’t see nothing. Then something pulled him. He got really scared. Then he remembered that his friend wanted to see if he was a scaredy cat or not. He couldn’t run away from the ghost. The ghosts arms were too strong.
TO BE CONTINUD.
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Then the ghost took John up to the ghost’s old dirty room. John said, ”What are you doing”? The ghost said, “I want to show you something”. “What are you going to show me”? “Something”. “Okay. Nnow follow me.” John got even more scared. He thought that the ghost was going to kill him.” Open the door,” said the ghost to John. John hurried and opened the door. Inside there was a friend forever box. The ghost opened the box and in the box there was a friendship bracelet. The ghost told John if John could be his friends? John laughed at the ghost. He thought it was a joke. Then the ghost said, ”It’s not a joke”. The ghost told John a story about when he was the age of John. Then John realized that the ghost didn’t have friends so he said “I’ll be your friend”.
SO THEY LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER.
THE END.
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Article posted October 30, 2007 at 07:59 PM GMT0 •
comment • Reads 1278
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Halloween story
Article posted November 1, 2007 at 10:09 PM GMT0 •
comment (1) • Reads 1199
by Alec
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Once upon a time there were boys named Bob and Bill Stink. Their last name was Stink because their family really stinked.
It was two days until Halloween. Bob was going to be a Zombie. Bill was going to be a Wolverine.
Bob was eight years old and Bill was six years old.
It was Halloween night. Bob and Bill went trick or treating, but just by themselves and Bob was skipping, but then he got ran over by a bus.
Then Bob got up and said to the driver of the bus, “You stink at driving”.
Then they went to this old man’s house. The old man was 80 years old. Bob and Bill rang the door bell the old man said, “Hello". Then the old man fainted, because remember I told you that they stink. Well that’s why, and then they stole all the candy. They got Mike and Ikes and Skittles, Gummy Bears and Herseys and that was it.
But then they went to a Haunted House an old lady lived in except she
had the best candy. She pretty much had all the candy ever made.
So Bob rang the door bell and then she opened the door and she ate Bob’s head, but then since Bill didn’t get eaten he got all the candy. So then when Bill got home he ate half of the candy.
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Article posted November 1, 2007 at 10:09 PM GMT0 •
comment (1) • Reads 1199
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Happy Halloween
Article posted October 30, 2007 at 07:52 PM GMT0 •
comment (1) • Reads 1750
by Gabrielle
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In a few days it will be Halloween. I don’t have a costume. I might be a bride or a cat. It will be fun. I have a black cat. Some people think they’re bad luck but they are not bad luck. I love Halloween. I get to see my friends and get lots of candy. It will be fun. Happy Halloween!
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Article posted October 30, 2007 at 07:52 PM GMT0 •
comment (1) • Reads 1750
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The Talking Pumpkin
Article posted October 31, 2007 at 07:19 PM GMT0 •
comment • Reads 1546
by Emily
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Once upon a time there was a farmer that sold pumpkins. One day the farmer sold out of pumpkins. There was only one left. He decided to throw it away. But when he went to pick it up it talked! "What do you think you're doing?" it said. The farmer quickly put the pumpkin down in astonishment. "I – I wasn’t doing anything" he said. His voice shaking, He had never been so surprised in his life! The pumpkin then looked at him very confused "Ooh" he said "I thought you were going to throw me away". "Why would you think that" he said. "Well" the pumpkin began "There was a farmer who wanted to throw me away too" "ho dear me" said the farmer. "That is horrible" "yes I know it’s a tragedy" said the pumpkin. "They think I am so scary and I will tell you that it just plan hurts!" he was so angry his eyes were turning red! The farmer then said "Well I will not do that to you" then the pumpkin calmed down. Well if you really think that then I think that you and I will be great friends!"
THE END!!!
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Article posted October 31, 2007 at 07:19 PM GMT0 •
comment • Reads 1546
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THE CURSE OF THE JACK
Article posted October 30, 2007 at 08:01 PM GMT0 •
comment • Reads 1323
by Christopher
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THE CURSE OF THE JACK
O LANTERN
BY CHRIS
One day a boy went though the woods, unalarmed when he saw a pumpkin in the fields. “My that would make a perfect Jack o lantern” he thought. He left to get his dad. The pumpkin glowed green. The boy stopped, he screamed “MOOOOOOOOOOOM DAAAAAAAAD” The pumpkin disappeared. Be gone!!!! A voice told him. He ran. Then the pumpkin reappeared. RUN=http://!! The boy ran home. When he got home he saw that Jack o lantern on the porch. “Okay” he said while he grabbed a branch and then ran after the Jack o lantern he hit that pumpkin. The pumpkin splattered all over the porch. “Yes” he said. The Jack o lantern returned to his form. “No” he said. The Jack o lantern laughed. He did it again. “No”. He thought. He ran to the roof. The roof fell on the pumpkin. I’m dead. He said. The boy became famous around the world. The end.
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Article posted October 30, 2007 at 08:01 PM GMT0 •
comment • Reads 1323
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Soldier’s story
Article posted November 2, 2007 at 10:23 PM GMT0 •
comment (1) • Reads 1648
by Colton
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Once upon a time there were 7 boys named Colton, William, Holden, Gabe, Evan, Adam and Alec. Their job was to kill the evil soldiers. The evil soldiers have heard that the good soldiers were good fighters. The evil soldiers would have to do a lot of work to kill the good soldiers. Both teams had paint ball guns. The good and evil also have tanks. The tanks shoot paint balls. The good have grenades that have paint in them. It’s a big fight with the good and evil. The good thing is that the good side has a captain that’s Colton. Colton also has the best gun. He’s the best fighter too. Now here comes Adam in the tank. To kill all of these evil soldiers that was around him. Adam look out there’s an evil tank coming after you! Boom! Good gob Adam. Let’s see if he’s still alive. Nope he’s not alive. Alec! Some one’s going to shoot you! Are you alive? Nooooo=http://! William Holden Gabe Evan Adam come over here were Alec is shot. Alec, are you ok? Yes I am said Alec.
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Article posted November 2, 2007 at 10:23 PM GMT0 •
comment (1) • Reads 1648
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THE HEADLESS HORSE MAN!
Article posted October 31, 2007 at 07:14 PM GMT0 •
comment • Reads 1523
by Noelle
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THE HEADLESS HORSE MAN!
By Noelle
One night there was a man named Otto who went to Rocky hills. He was very brave because nobody went there. But his mother got a call from the president saying “I heard about Otto”. He said “Otto I think is very brave”. He talked some more “I want Otto in the war”. Otto’s mother yelled “OH MY GOSH!”. She was about to faint. She said “Otto is at Rocky Hills right now”. The president said “Well? Tell him that I called OK”. Otto’s mother said “OK” and hung up the phone. Otto’s mother was scared because tomorrow was the day Otto was coming back. The next day there was a knock at the door. It was 1:00am. Otto’s mother answered it. It was Otto. She told him about the phone call. Otto said “I’ll go to the war mom”. Otto was 20 years old. He was old enough. Otto’s mother called back to the president. The president came by at 3:00pm, dropped off the armor and said “Tomorrow is war day” and left. The next day Otto and his mother got up and got dressed and left at 12:00pm. Otto left for the war at Rocky hills! Otto got on a horse and rode away. On day 27 war begun, rocks began falling. A rock fell on Otto and he died. But his spirit still comes to find his HEAD! As we call him the ………….. oh yea the HEAD LESS HORSE MAN=http://!!
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Article posted October 31, 2007 at 07:14 PM GMT0 •
comment • Reads 1523
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On The School Dance
Article posted November 1, 2007 at 10:29 PM GMT0 •
comment • Reads 1460
by Zareya
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One day on Halloween there was a girl named Mary. She had a school dance. She wanted to go but she thought that everyone would laugh at her. She decided to go but she didn’t know what to wear. She went to the dance with this boy who never liked her. She was wearing a beautiful white dress but when she started to dance she was dancing by a cup of juice and the juice spilled on her and her dress got very wet and everyone started to laugh at her. She got very mad and she turned red and her head started to turn a lot of times. While her head was turning she was saying die a lot of times. Bad stuff started to happen to everyone.
They say that if you go into your bathroom and turn out all the lights and look into your mirror and say bloody Mary three times she’ll be in your mirror. I tried it but it did not work. My lights started to blink and my cousin came in and it stopped. I was very mad because she opened the door so hard that it hit me in the face and I yelled. She said it was my fault because I was in front of the door. She made me cry very much. She was kidding, and I got very mad. On the next part she never wanted to go to another school dance. That is the way my auntie tells it. That’s what happened on my cousin’s birthday party. She is a girl. Now I’m going to tell you how her party went. We had a lot of candy.
We put makeup on. We also had a quiz and we had bottles of Gatorade. My mom was wondering why we were telling scary stories. My dad was wondering why we look tired. My little cousin was so scared that she wanted to go to sleep with her dad. My big cousin Giovanni was so scared that she went to her room to go to bed and she was the birthday girl. I am going to tell you my other big cousin’s story. It was about when she was alone at home and there was someone at the door that was knocking the trees down and he opened the door and he started to bring everyone in and he said, “Can I can I bring Bloody Mary and the Boogey man.?’’ She said sure and they had a party. All of sudden when her mom came back they weren’t there. She said it was true but we disagreed with her. My mom was so mad when I told her because she disagreed with her. My dad was so happy to see us so he asked how the party went. My Auntie was so nice that she gave each of us two bags of candy.
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Article posted November 1, 2007 at 10:29 PM GMT0 •
comment • Reads 1460
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