I need to work more with my essay writting ability , I have never been good with puncuation and my school wasn't one that really focused on it. So being able to correctly use grammar and puncuation would be what  I'd need to focus on. Also idea planning ,because I have too many ideas that I want or could write about but I tend to re-write things over and over again. Revising my work would also be an area I need work in or at least showing I've revised it. I don't tend to make rough copies , I usually write and erase repeatedly until I get out perfectly(to me atleast) what I am trying to say.