25 May 2012
Genre: Persuasive Writing
I strongly believe children shouldn't have phones.
There are three main reasons to support my argument.
Firstly it could damage and keep our brains from developing at a young age.
Another reason is our phones can distract us from doing many things e.g. doing homework and playing outside with our friends.
Furthermore there are a lot of people who bully others on phones and make them feel uncomfortable which is called cyber bullying.
Therfore in my opinion we shouldn't have a phone because it is sometimes dangerous.