25 May 2012

Genre: Persuasive Writing

I strongly believe children shouldn't have phones.

There are three main reasons to support my argument.

Firstly it could damage and keep our brains from developing at a young age.

Another reason is our phones can distract us from doing many things e.g. doing homework and playing outside with our friends.

Furthermore there are a lot of people who bully others on phones and make them feel uncomfortable which is called cyber bullying.

Therfore in my opinion we shouldn't have a phone because it is sometimes dangerous.