When i finally got to doing it i thought i approached it good, i conducted my essay with answering the questiong and then connecting it with 2 of the texts that we have read which was "Robbie" and "The Nest" that i felt connected quote. Then also my views. And it was also hard writing 2 whole pages because you had to explain but not over explain the question. so in a way it was hard to stretch out what i was trying to explain. I think i could improve by reading all the story's over again to get a better understanding and to see if another part of the story was better.

For the making connections assignment I took a different approach then I did for the minor assignments. I did this by doing more research for it, by re-reading the texts that we did in class, and by using the Internet to find a quote to write about. I found it a bit difficult to make connections to the texts but I could relate to it personally, and knew of some people that had relationship experiences that related to the quote. I never had any real problems writing two pages, I overcame it by re-wording my sentences making some of them a bit longer, and adding more detail. The only thing I would change is the amount of time I had to work on it, but I had a few other assignments I needed to get finished for this class and for math. But in the end I found the critical response assignment more difficult.

Well, at first when i got the major assignment I was very intimidated . I wasnt really sure how to go about writing it but once i got the hang of it ,it was so easy for me i just started to write down a few things ,next thing i know I was done! I feel like this was the best assignment I've done so far in this class. The one thing i would like to improve on would be expanding my vocabulary, so i can fully explain my thoughts. 

On the assignment that i just finished i feel that i could of keep writing about it. i had way to much on paper and i had to cut it ''down'' big time.when it comes to the world and the people in it , there just so much to talk about.I dint feel that i treat my assignments different from the others. the quote I used made me write down to much information that i felt I was just writing my thoughts and not doing my homework .what i wish that I could change is how i can keep the people who read it interested long enough to finish.How does Carlos Castaneda do it?

At first when I read the criteria of the major assignment, it looked a little harder than the minor assignments that we did before. The minor assignments to me were easier , but with the major assignment I took it very seriously.  That is why I had made a plan sheet for my assignment, like when to work on it. Before I had started my major assignment, we had some time to discuss the major assignment in the class, that was very helpful for me.+First I started by picking a quote from the sheet of quotes that Judy gave us in class, then I re-read the story we had read in the class. After that I watched the video "How will we Love" again, I found a couple of connections between the quote I chose, the video I watched and the story we had read in the class. Then I started writing my rough copy. During all of this work, I had a few difficulties, but the good thing was that Judy gave us more time to work on it and finish.  At the end, I was very happy and impressed with my major assignment. Something that I want to improve on is my grammer and spelling.

I think making connections was a good one for the first assignment. As we can all relate whether we are in a marriage or have family and friends that are in a serious relationship. It was a hard assignment for me as we had to respond to the movie and on people comments on documentary. I worked really hard on this assignment and I’m sure it will make me better for the other ones to come.

I was happy with the result but I need to improve on my grammar.