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Blog 2 I chose the article about the mother getting kicked off the bus because her baby daughter was being too loud. I changed the form and the audience. My final product was a personal journal about someone’s experience on the same bus as the mother who was kicked off, and their view points on what happened.
I chose to change the article to a journal because I felt that it needed to be viewed from another point. The article mainly shows the drivers view point, but not very much is touched on the mother or the passengers on the bus. I made the journal touch on some of those viewpoints.
The language I used in my text is very relaxed, because it is a journal entry. The words are put together like someone is just speaking, it’s not really to inform anyone so the language isn’t technical or anything like that it’s a personal piece so it’s done more free hand style.

Article posted March 12, 2012 at 08:25 PM • comment • Reads 230 • see all articles

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