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Blog 2 Mi(1) llamo Ryan Smith. Yo soy(2) quintos(3) anos(4) diez y siete(5). Yo soy(6) 1 hermano. mi(7) hermano quantos(8) anos(9) diez y cinco. Yo soy(10) 3 hermanas quantos(11) anos(12) diez y nueve. Yo soy cazador. Me gusta estar afuera.

Dylan es timido(13). Dylan es(14) diez y cinco quintos(15) anos(16). (17)Dylan te(18) gusta (19)basketbol(20).

Mi(21) y Dylan, nosotros somos (22)band(23). Mi(24) y Dylan, nosotros yo(25) evo(26) en(27) Pennsylvania. Mi(28) y Dylan, nosotros tenomos(29) 1 hermano.

(1)spelling
(2)wrong verb, use TENER
(3)delete
(4)missing tilde, move to after age
(5)this needs to have "años" after it
(6)note 2
(7)caps
(8)delete
(9)note 4
(10)note 2
(11)delete
(12)note 4
(13)missing accent
(14)note 2
(15)delete
(16)missing tilde
(17)insert "A"
(18)change to "le"
(19)insert "el"
(20)spelling, missing accent
(21)change to subject pronoun "Yo"
(22)insert "en la"
(23)spelling
(24)note 21
(25)delete
(26)change to nosotros form of SER
(27)change to "de"
(28)note 21
(29)spelling

Article posted February 6, 2012 at 12:17 PM • comment • Reads 47 • see all articles


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