An unassisted personal Narrative Written TK© December 13 2013
One summer, my dad decided to take us on a family trip to DisneyLand PARIS!! The next day my mom and I started to pack for our trip. The flight was at five am . So, My mom told my two brothers and I to sleep early.
Wake up!!! I heard my dad scream. ‘’it’s time to go!’’ I stood up, I couldn’t feel my legs, it felt like a truck came and ran over my two legs. I changed my clothes and brushed my teeth and I ate really fast. Everyone was putting pressure on me. I could hear my dad say ‘’common Tala hurry up’’. Everyone was waiting for me. It felt like the whole world was counting on me. I finally finished! ‘’We reached.’’ My dad said. I felt so excited, I felt like I was going to burst with flames of happiness ‘’ DISNEYLAND, HERE I COME!!!’’I said in my head. After three days I spotted a HAUNTED HOUSE. I asked my mom if we can go, I really wanted to go. I felt like there was a treasure that was hidden somewhere inside it that made people want to go to it so badly . My mom answered Sure, we will go. Go tell your brothers and ask them if they want to go. But we are only staying for a while because we are living in one hour.’’ I wanted to dance In the lobby. I ran to my brothers and asked them. I was hoping they would say yes and they did=http:// When we went in the lights were off . I felt like someone was watching me. It felt like a cave, that was full with unwanted and un-liked creatures. The floor was going down like the building had just fallen. I held my mom real tight. There was fake paintings of dead people, and it was really creepy. I couldn’t find my brothers I couldn’t see them( well obviously no one can see anyone because the lights were turned of)’’Boom’’ I heard a sound, the floor stopped and I landed on a chair with my mom beside me and my two brothers in front of me. When I landed on the chair I felt really scared my hands were shivering like I have stayed in a blizzard for days and days. I held on to my mom arm so tight. Her face was turning red, It was as r red as a tomato because of how much I was squeezing her arm. My brothers were laughing like they just won a million dollars , and here I was sitting on a chair squeezing my moms arm. After a while we saw ghosts ( FAKE ONES…OF COURSE But they looked realistic ) . I was shivering from fear, like I just saw a real GHOST !!! The music was getting much more scary, I thought my heart was pumping really fast like someone pumping three thousand balloons In one second. My mom told me everything is fake, but I didn’t believe It and on the second hand my brothers were trying to kill me with fear. The chairs stopped moving and my heart stopped pumping. I ran towards the door, and I ran outside as fast a zebra, my mom was following me, so where my brothers.
I was scared at first but at the end I was happy that I did it, and now I always write and talk about it and I am sure that I will go to it one more time.