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All the students in room 15 teach and learn from each other. The challenges that are achieved are limited only by the restrictions of their own minds!

by Hi 2525 teacher: Michael La Marr


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Bonus BLOG 05/16
Old Sacramento 04/22
Westminster Woods Poetry 04/15
The Terrible Wave 01/08
California's History 10/23

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5/24 floods
5/1 Poems
1/31 Terrible Wave Description
12/16 California History

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The Terrible Wave was a descriptive book created by Marden Dahlstedt. She used words I have never used in my life like prominent, prissy, sedate, and languid. This is what I think.
One of the quotes in the book is, “. . . In the pale watery light of the moon, they saw the head of a child.” It’s remarkable how descriptive she is because most people would just stay simple and say, “In the light of the moon they saw the head of a child.” She also turned, “She fell onto a mattress,” to “With a sickening thud , she landed, sprawling on something horribly soft and squashy.” Another quote is “Trunks whirled by, wicked-looking boards sintered with nails, showers of glass winged a thousand tiny arrows . . . ” Again her quotes are over the top in description. I also like the way she uses similes like when she wrote “. . . linens flapped like eerie white birds. . . , ” because she is still descriptive and uses similes at the same time. That makes her an even better writer than I thought she was.
Other books she wrote are the Shadow of the Lighthouse and Stopping Place. I haven't even heard of them, but I’m sure they are just as descriptive as The Terrible Wave.

Article posted January 31, 2012 at 02:55 PM • comment • Reads 94 • see all articles

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