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 Max and Joe, and the cat Bob (3rd person Omniscient) Max and Joe are playing catch in the back yard. Joe threw the ball as hard as he could, and Max thought ugh not again. ohh well I'll go and get itthen I saw the neighbor’s cat Bob; Bob just stood there scared thinking"Don't come near me! Don't come near me!" Then Bob started sprinting away screaming when he saw that Max was going to chase him thinking "I got him now!" but Max never did catch Bob. (3rd person Limited omniscient) Max and Joe are playing catch in the back yard. Joe threw the ball as hard as he could, and Max chased after it until Max saw the neighbor’s cat Bob; Bob just stood there scared. Then Bob started sprinting away when he saw that Max started to chase him, but Max never did catch Bob. (3rd person Dramatic) Max and Joe are playing catch in the back yard. Joe threw the ball farther than he should of, and Max chased after it until Max saw the neighbor’s cat Bob; Bob just stood there shaking. Then Bob started sprinting away when he saw that Max started to chase him, but Max never did catch Bob. Article posted November 21, 2011 at 12:56 PM • comment • Reads 1431 • see all articles |
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