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Article posted January 20, 2012 at 04:29 PM GMT0 •
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Katie
Miss Melanie Transue
CP English 9
6 January 2012
Evil? Or not Evil?
Evil or not evil, that is a question!?! Have you ever suspected anything before? Where you ever accused of being evil? In the book Something Wicked This Way Comes by Ray Bradbury Jim Nightshade is so evil. The reasons why people he knows thinks that he’s evil is in which he was born, how reckless he is, and how he is “the dark one.”
First things first…. The circumstances in which Jim is born. In the prologue it states that Jim is born on Halloween. It also states that Jim was born “one minute after midnight” (Bradbury, prologue). You know how the youngest is always the sweet one?!? Well in this instance the youngest is the most evil. Just because he was born on Halloween and how he’s the youngest. Yes but he is evil because he was born on Halloween and he is the youngest.
RECKLESS, RECKLESS YOU THINK THAT IM RECKLESS. Yes other people think that Jim is reckless. There is this part in the book where Jim takes down the lightning rod (Bradbury 42 end of chapter 9) I find this very reckless. In the beginning of chapter 18 Will and Jim find the carousel and they say that “its horses, goats, antelopes, zebras, speared through their spines with brass javelins, hung contorted as in a death rictus, asking mercy with their fright-colored eyes, seeking revenge with their panic-colored teeth” (Bradbury, chapter 18 first paragraph). Mr. Dark is evil. We all know that, well that part in the book where he is looking for Will and Jim in the library. Jim for once thought that is was a good idea to yell and give away their position. Jim pays attention to his surroundings. Yes that is true but the only reason why is because he is curious.
Dark or light? According to Mr. Halloway Jim is a “Black hat.” We can infer that “black hat” means that he is dark or evil because of his actions (Bradbury, End of chapter 4) Jim does some pretty bad stuff, one of the worse is when he sneaks out at night in the middle of the night. Jim and Will are best friends but, Will is always trying to look out for Jim like for instance when Will is trying to pull Jim off the carousal Jim refuses to let Will do this. Jim gets off the carousal but, only because Will made him (Bradbury, chapter 51)
In conclusion Jim is evil because of when he was born, being reckless and how he is “the dark one”
Work cited
Bradbury, Ray. Something Wicked This Way Comes. New York, NY: William Morrow, 1962.
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Article posted January 20, 2012 at 04:29 PM GMT0 •
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Article posted December 19, 2011 at 04:26 PM GMT0 •
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DECEMBER DECEMBER!!!
Come and explore with me what December has in store. There will be snow and ice. Then every thing is nice. So come with me and we will explore the wonderful things that are in store.
This month is marvelous
Just come and see
All the wonder thing in store
For you and for me
What is to come?
There is
Snow……..snow
Like you wouldn’t believe
There will be presents and gifts
And trees all aglow
With stars and lights
With sugar plums and candy canes
There’s time with your family
And time with your friends
The only problem is when it’s time to go
Everyone wants to stay
To play in the snow….
So in December to my surprise
There is no snow
Sooooooooo……
I have to go…
Article posted December 19, 2011 at 04:26 PM GMT0 •
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Article posted November 21, 2011 at 04:45 PM GMT0 •
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Kyler the turkey was just wandering through the woods. All of the sudden he was pushed in to a well. Unfortunalty Kyler was out of luck the well was dry so he hit rock bottom.
Then a flash flood came upon the well and it lifed Kyler half way out of the well. He saw the well as half full others thought it was half empty. A poor old farmer saw the well and tied a rope and a pail to the well so that he sould get come water. He accedently hit Kyler on the head which knocked him unconscious. Luckly he survived that huge blow to the head.
After he woke back up he climbed out of the well. He got out of the well and slipped on some ice and fell. He was running from a hunter. Then he tryed to run into a house but on the way in the triped over a step and fell again and hit his head. This time he didn't survive.
Article posted November 21, 2011 at 04:45 PM GMT0 •
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Article posted November 15, 2011 at 05:28 PM GMT0 •
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third persom omniscient
Once there was a cat and a mouse. The cat was thinking “oh my that mouse would by mighty tasty.” The mouse was thinking “I really hope that this cat doesn’t eat me!” The cat asked the mouse” would you like something to eat because I would.” The mouse answered “I don’t know, what do you have to eat.” The cat answered “YOU!!” Then he ate the mouse.
Limited omniscient
Once there was a cat and a mouse. The cat looked very hungry the mouse thought. So he asked the cat if it was hungry. The cat answered “yes very.” The mouse became very nervous and thought that he was going to die. His suspicion was right that cat ate he up
darmatic
Once there was a cat and a mouse. The cat was hungry. The mouse became nervous. And the cat ended up eating by that cat.
Article posted November 15, 2011 at 05:28 PM GMT0 •
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Article posted November 7, 2011 at 05:40 PM GMT0 •
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My Favorite things
Raindrops on roses and whiskers on kittens
Bright copper kettles and warm woolen mittens
Brown paper packages tied up with strings
These are a few of my favorite things
Cream colored ponies and crisp apple strudels
Door bells and sleigh bells and schnitzel with noodles
Wild geese that fly with the moon on their wings
These are a few of my favorite things
Girls in white dresses with blue satin sashes
Snowflakes that stay on my nose and eyelashes
Silver white winters that melt into Springs
These are a few of my favorite things
When the dog bites
When the bee stings
When I'm feeling sad
I simply remember my favorite things
And then I don't feel so bad.
Raindrops on roses and whiskers on kittens
Bright copper kettles and warm woolen mittens
Brown paper packages tied up with strings
These are a few of my favorite things
Cream colored ponies and crisp apple strudels
Door bells and sleigh bells and schnitzel with noodles
Wild geese that fly with the moon on their wings
These are a few of my favorite things
Girls in white dresses with blue satin sashes
Snowflakes that stay on my nose and eyelashes
Silver white winters that melt into Springs
These are a few of my favorite things
When the dog bites
When the bee stings
When I'm feeling sad
I simply remember my favorite things
And then I don't feel so bad.
Article posted November 7, 2011 at 05:40 PM GMT0 •
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