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Time To Go To The Playground
Article posted November 15, 2011 at 03:21 PM GMT0 •
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3rd Times A Charm
3rd Person Omniscient
Bethany and Jesse are at the playground. Bethany was thinking about going down the slide. Jesse was thinking about chasing her to the slide. Bethany really wanted to go down the slide first. Jesse changed his mind and went to the swings.
3rd Person Limited Omniscient
Bethany and Jesse are at the playground. Bethany was glancing at Jesse. Jesse was thinking about beating Bethany to the slide. Bethany started to jump. Jesse changed his mind and decide to go to the swings.
3rd Person Dramatic
Bethany and Jesse are at the playground. Bethany was glancing at Jesse. Jesse walked from the slide to the swings. He said, “I’d rather go to the swings.”
Bethany said, “Good because I want to go down the slide.”
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Article posted November 15, 2011 at 03:21 PM GMT0 •
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What are Heros? and Books v.s Movies
Article posted October 14, 2011 at 03:14 PM GMT0 •
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What is a hero to you? Isn’t it someone who saves lives? Someone who isn’t scared of other people? I don’t consider teachers a hero because you really talk to teachers about anything other than school work, they don’t really care unless you don’t do your homework, and they don’t talk about stuff that is bothering you.
You look across the road and the grass is greener over there. How is it greener? How could it be different grass? I don’t think grass is greener on the other side because the world has the same seasons we do, all grass is the same, grass is greener on the side is just a figure of speech.
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Article posted October 14, 2011 at 03:14 PM GMT0 •
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Summer(:
Article posted September 22, 2011 at 02:30 PM GMT0 •
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September Free Write
During the summer this year I got to go to the beach with my dad. I absolutely love going to the beach. I go there for a week every summer, and it never gets old. I love putting my feet in the hot sand, and listing to the wave’s crash on the shore. In the morning I see dolphins go across the ocean, and the sun rise is beautiful.
I go in the water as the waves run into me, and knock me over. It can be scary to some people, but to me it’s not. I watch the surfers ride the waves into shore, I want to be a surfer someday, but I am afraid of getting attacked by a shark. This was the best summer of my life. I can't wait to go back next year.
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Article posted September 22, 2011 at 02:30 PM GMT0 •
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