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3rd time's a Charm
Chris Olshan
3rd times a charm
The Bee and the Bird
3rd Person Omniscient
Bee and bird are outside the tree. Bird was thinking about eating the bees’ hunny. Bee was thinking of stinging the bird if he came near. Bird began to think about how yummy the hunny would be. Bee looked at the bird and threatened him with his sting if he touched his hunny.
3rd Person Limited
Bee and bird are outside the tree. Bird was thinking about eating the bees’ hunny. Bee was buzzing around the tree with his sting out ready for attack.Bird began to think about how yummy the hunny would be. Bee looked at the bird and threatened him with his sting if he touched his yummy hunny.
3rd Person Dramatic
Bee and bird are outside the tree. Bird was flying around the bees’ hunny. Bee was flying nearby and said, “I am ready to defend this lovely hunny!”
Bird began to sing, “Hunny is yummy!”
Bee looked at the bird and threatened him with his sting if he touched his hunny.
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