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Article posted May 4, 2012 at 12:48 PM GMT0 •
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Do you like country music? Do you think a country song would be the same as an old-fashioned play? Have you ever heard the song "Romeo" by Dolly Parton? In the song (Romeo" Dolly's Romeo in her song is the same as the Romeo in the play.
The artist that wrote this song uses Romeo correctly, it's semi like the play just turned into a song. The writer is in love with him and wants him to come dance will her. She doesn’t want Romeo to leave her. The writer wants to be his Juliet.("Romeo, Romeo, I want to be your Julie", "But I'm one step away from love
So don't step out on me")
The deception of the characters are not the same as the play though. It a cross between a movie star and a super hero in a book. Romeo is a cowboy in jeans and not a Montague and not in tights. It doesn’t explain Juliet or Dolly at all though.("A cross between a movie star
And a hero in a book")
Though Romeo by Dolly Parton isn’t just like the play it’s very close. She explains Romeo as her only lover, and she doesn’t want him to leave her.But together, if this song was added into the play it wouldn't sound good since, Romeo is a cowboy in Dolly's song.
Article posted May 4, 2012 at 12:48 PM GMT0 •
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Article posted April 19, 2012 at 05:45 PM GMT0 •
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april free write
It's April! You know what they say, April showers bring May flowers! There hasn't been much rain, but the flowers are still growing! Soon it'll be in the high Nineties. I can't wait! We'll be able to go swimming and lay out in the sun! Best of all schools ending in like thirty days! The last few weeks of school seems to DRAG by, every minute that passes seems like an eternity. I’m so looking forward to that last day school ends at 10:45 am! That’s truly the best part of the whole year. No doubt about that.
Some leave for summer vacation at the end of the year some have already gone and came back. I’ll be the one leaving! I will not be staying behind like some of the others. Too bad summer didn’t last as long as the school year did, but it's all very short lived. It seems as the summer has started it is soon ending! Then another year at school!
Article posted April 19, 2012 at 05:45 PM GMT0 •
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Article posted April 13, 2012 at 05:54 PM GMT0 •
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March Free Write.
Summer all most here! School will be ending soon! Vacation times oh most here, soon I’ll be packing my suitcases and putting them in the car and off to the beach. This year we plan on going to North Carolina, Holden beach. My sister myself and are friends make a trip to the beach every year, no parents no worries! On vacation we have a blast. Its about a 12-14 hour drive to North Carolina and when we arrive everyone’s showing there true colors, lol. First we get to unpack all are stuff then off to the market to buy food! After that its about dark and were walking off the back porch and into the sand! At night the beach is a beautiful calm place, a place to relax after a long drive.
At night there’s crabs crawling crossed the sand and fish jumping in the water. The tide gets higher and higher as the night fades away, waves crashing into your body some so strong they sweep you out and remove the sand from under your feet. Summer seems to fly by as each day goes by and you’re enjoying yourself and then it hits schools going to be here any week! Time to pack up and go home again! The summer doesn’t last long but its only a matter of time before it comes again!
Article posted April 13, 2012 at 05:54 PM GMT0 •
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Article posted December 14, 2011 at 01:40 PM GMT0 •
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December Freewrite
Its December! You all know what that means? Gifts and snow. I truly love December. When the snow begins to fall it covers everything making it all snow white and beautiful! For some the month of December is the hardest of them all, why? Because some can’t afford the gifts there loved ones want and some don’t have the money to buy them. That’s the down fall of Christmas time.
Then there’s slay riding!That’s always fun until you get hurt, some kids snow ball fight others build snowman all having fun. If your religious then you like Christmas because its Jesus birthday! Some kids get over a week or more off of school and others many not.
After Christmas is over it’s the New Year. Some say the worlds ending, but I don’t believe them because no one can predict when the end is near. So instead over worrying about the world ending sit back and relax on this Christmas!
Article posted December 14, 2011 at 01:40 PM GMT0 •
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Article posted December 7, 2011 at 01:40 PM GMT0 •
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In the book Something Wicked This Way Comes, I had a question. For example, Why didn't Charels Halloway not tell his wife and son about The most Beautiful Women in The World?
Article posted December 7, 2011 at 01:40 PM GMT0 •
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Article posted November 15, 2011 at 06:54 PM GMT0 •
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November Freewrite
It's November. the best month of them all since Thanksgiving is coming!Then Christmas a few weeks after. To me thanksgiving is an extra x-mas a month before the real x-mas. One of my very favorite things about thanksgiving is the food! me and my sister get to go to family members house’s to eat,but every year it seems theres more food, which is great if you want get fat.I can only eat so much till I get sick. Other than just eating I get to see my family members some which I haven’t seen in years. We all talk and eat but at ever family gathering there’s drama somewhere in between and that’s one of the least things I like about thanksgiving. I guess you could say all me and my family members are close some more than others.
Hopefully this year there is snow on
Thanksgiving day but that’s very doubt full. After we all eat we usually sit down together and watch football, which I watch even though it’s not the best. By time the games over its dark out and time for all of us to go home and the day goes well and i enjoy it since I see all my family.
Article posted November 15, 2011 at 06:54 PM GMT0 •
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Article posted November 15, 2011 at 01:53 PM GMT0 •
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Chris Olshan
3rd times a charm
The Bee and the Bird
3rd Person Omniscient
Bee and bird are outside the tree. Bird was thinking about eating the bees’ hunny. Bee was thinking of stinging the bird if he came near. Bird began to think about how yummy the hunny would be. Bee looked at the bird and threatened him with his sting if he touched his hunny.
3rd Person Limited
Bee and bird are outside the tree. Bird was thinking about eating the bees’ hunny. Bee was buzzing around the tree with his sting out ready for attack.Bird began to think about how yummy the hunny would be. Bee looked at the bird and threatened him with his sting if he touched his yummy hunny.
3rd Person Dramatic
Bee and bird are outside the tree. Bird was flying around the bees’ hunny. Bee was flying nearby and said, “I am ready to defend this lovely hunny!”
Bird began to sing, “Hunny is yummy!”
Bee looked at the bird and threatened him with his sting if he touched his hunny.
Article posted November 15, 2011 at 01:53 PM GMT0 •
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