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Starting a New Family
3rd Time's a Charm
One. Third Person Omniscient
William was walking down the road when he saw a little boy all alone. William felt worried for the boy, as the boy was all alone. Not only this, but the boy was greatly upset.
“Why are you alone?” asked William.
“Maybe I should explain it to him, he could help me,” thought the boy.
“My parents abandoned me and I have nowhere else to go.”
“Maybe I should help the boy,” thought William.
“If you want you can live with me. I have only my parents yet 1 extra room in my house. My parents have been trying for a new child anyway. Follow me.”
On the way to his new home, the boy felt happiness and no longer lonely. The boy was welcome to his new family. His parents took care of him, and so did his new brother. For the first time in his life he felt like he belonged where he was.
Two. Third Person Limited Omniscient
William was walking down the road when he saw a little boy all alone. William felt worried for the boy, as the boy was all alone. Not only this, but he looked greatly upset.
“Why are you alone?” asked William.
The boy looked like he was thinking if he should tell.
“My parents abandoned me and I have nowhere else to go.”
“Maybe I should help the boy,” thought William.
“If you want you can live with me. I have only my parents yet 1 extra room in my house. My parents have been trying for a new child anyway. Follow me.”
On the way home, William noticed the boy looked much more cheerful than he was when he found him. The boy was welcome to his new family. His parents took care of him, and so did his new brother. William noticed that the boy really did fit in with the family; it’s like he was always there.
Three. Third Person Dramatic
William was walking down the road when he saw a little boy all alone. The boy was all alone. Not only this, but he looked greatly upset.
“Why are you alone,” asked William.
“My parents abandoned me and I have nowhere else to go.”
“Maybe I should help the boy,” whispered William.
“If you want you can live with me. I have only my parents yet 1 extra room in my house. My parents have been trying for a new child anyway. Follow me.”
On the way to his new home, the boy cracked a smile a couple of times. The boy was welcome to his new family. His parents took care of him, and so did his new brother. The boy fit in with the family perfectly.
Article posted November 7, 2011 at 07:56 AM •
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