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People in countries all around the world should remember the men and women who have served their countries in the armed forces to defend their freedoms. In the United States of America, we set aside Veterans Day to honor servicemen and servicewomen who have selflessly sacrificed their freedoms to fight for the rights of others. Citizens honor veterans in silence, words, and thoughts in respect for their service.
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