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Hey guys! Please give me feedback on this paragraph from my essay. It is the introduction.

Every time I see a soldier in uniform, I remember that I live in America, a land of freedom. What soldiers do for the country and its citizens is braver and more compassionate than anything I could ever dream of doing. They go to war knowing that they might not come home. That is why we honor our veterans every year. The soldiers come home heroes. People that we respect, thank, and remember.

Article posted October 27, 2011 at 04:44 PM • comment • Reads 71 • see all articles

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