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Article posted May 17, 2012 at 02:19 AM GMT •
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Ok, so 7th grade wasn’t my best year of school, but it was definiently my favorite. It was way fun being a seventh grader and knowing that I’m getting to be a teenager and stuff. But the thought of middle school being so close is just plain scary for me, I don’t know why. My grades were the most successful compared to last year, along with my band activities and just my moods in general. However, through all the success, I had some failiers. Such as turning in things on time. there was just so much that would pile up and then go back down that it was hard to keep up with. I learned lots of things during school, mostly how dissection works and how fun and creepy it can be, how much fun vocab tests can be, and how much I need to work on my group work skills. I would probably change many things ( not really many things.) like how much students dislike teachers for being stricter than others. I say, if you don’t do your work like your supposed to , then let the teacher be strict with you. that’s kinda their jobs, to be strict so you learn. ( ok, yeah I love all my teachers no matter what because they like me and I love homework and they are the ones that provide me with my love and also, I never really spoke up enough to get on their really bad side so I’m safe.) and things I learned the hard way, oh yes I have lots. I learned that group work is always a must in school in every class and you cant get out of it NO MATTER WHAT!, unless your like me, someone who holds their breathe when close to tears, causing a panic attack to happen and almost passing out in the middle of class. (note, I advise never to do this. I cant control it when I do it, but that does not mean its an easy way out of class. Its not.) I also learned the hard way that my little habit of doing my homework the night before the day I have the class instead of the night I get it, wont work out so well for me in the future.
And for all the new coming 7th graders, I just have to say congratulations on making it through the first stages of middle school. Advice I have to give for survival: make sure to do the homework the NIGHT IT IS GIVEN, not the night before its due. Trust me, youll have problems. And if you hate group work, prepare yourself because, you know, there is going to be a LOT of group work in 7th grade. More than 6th. And also, don’t be afraid to talk to the teachers. They aren’t ravenous dogs that will eat your head off if you don’t turn in your homework, or if you ask them a question, tell on a student for misbehavior that the teacher didn’t see. They are there to help you. if you feel better writing your problems down, then do that and hand it to them after class. They’ll talk to you and work things out. the teachers are really nice, despite what anyone says. And be sure to have fun, enjoy 7th grade. Just think, your almost through middle school with two years left to go. besides, your finally mature teenagers! That’s, like, the best thing ever I think. Well, it was for me.
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Article posted May 9, 2012 at 12:12 AM GMT •
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I learned that I love being behind the camera and just how much work being a Photojournalist is! ( missed my second break because of the work! XD) it was super fun, I enjoyed it and I have to say my favorite part would be when I was making the commercials for everyone and then recording the interview! Working the camera is just so much fun when I don’t have to say anything or be in front of it! XD ( I know, miss antisocial will soon get herself hurt because she cant speak up very well.) if I were to change anything, it would be the amount of time people get for breaks and that they have their breaks written down and carried with them, that way they don’t miss them. and if they did miss them, they would get to trade breaks with someone else. ( I was sad that I had missed my second breaks!)
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and i wantes to see if this post would work, so if it does then enjoy the song and thanks to http://randomrequest.weebly.com/ if it does work. if not, then thanks anyways! XD ( new to stuff like this with blogs!) BTWm this song is called Man Who Can't Be Moved by The Script and it's one of my fave songs by them.
Article posted May 8, 2012 at 11:42 PM GMT •
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Article posted May 8, 2012 at 10:43 PM GMT •
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Ok, I will be honest. I didn’t’ ask questions on people’s projects, which probably damaged the purpose of the History Fair for me. but I got nervous to even ask people a single thing about their topic! ( which is probably why the whole “ antisocial” thing is a problem for me.) and I can tell you one thing though, I learned a lot about my topic. Why was the Great Wall of China built? Because it was mostly to keep out Mongolian warriors that wanted to invade china and expand territory. Later on, however, after the war between the Mongolians had calmed down more, the wall soon became a road used for trading, of which is now known and the Silk Road. It is still the safe guard for the Silk Road, but it is now a major tourist attraction. And I learned that history does have an impact because of the fact that, if no one had come up with these things or even done all these things in the past, we wouldn’t be where we are today!
And as for what I learned from people’s boards, not a whole lot because I had scanned many of them and didn’t ask questions because I was nervous to. Well, I did learn a few things about what people had done and learned some interesting things…. But nothing really comes to mind of me learning much of anything from the other students boards. I barely looked at boards and pretty much did nothing but walk around and move my legs. I did learn the symbol for dragon in Chinese, and saw some interesting things about Greece, but learned nothing. Guess I’m going to have to improve on that.
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Ok, so I will admit that I haven’t even finished the book yet, but I know its going to be good because I read the book Party and it didn’t let me down, and it was written in the same style as Seedfolks. Seedfolks, for those of you who have no idea what it’s about, is about this girl with a broken home who starts a garden in an abandoned and trashed lot. As the girl does this, she has no idea that there are others watching her and soon pitching in. so it’s from everyone of the people’s perspectives, but they all tie into the garden that the girl had started, later on to have it grow into something beautiful, which changes a trashed and abandoned lot into something amazing. Party does the same thing, show everyone’s personal points of view, but it’s not a garden that ties them together, it’s a party. It’s about high school kids, so I expected no less. ( taught me many things though about right and wrong and big things about drugs and alcohol and other things that could turn my life upside down. Great life lessons to be learned through that book.) as for the activities we did for Seedfolks, I have to say they were fun. ( just would have prefered doing more things that didn’t make my cat want to eat them. such as the plant activity with my choir class. My darling kitten, Asia, ate the worm and the plant. =_=) but they were fun and really good. The “big idea” of the story I would have to say would be ( again haven’t finished the book.) that just something so simple can make everyone’s life better, fun and even turn something beautiful. And my fave character as of yet? That’s a tough one because I haven’t met all of them yet. But I would have to say it would be the kid with the uncle who doesn’t speak English and no one can understand what he says because he speaks a different language than his family and everyone else. I like this character because he’s spunky, and gets a smart attitude that makes you hate him so much that you love him. ( I know, weird right?!) my fave activity was probably the music one in my band class because it was fun to try and guess which songs went with which country and person. ( even if I missed a ton of them! XD)
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Article posted April 24, 2012 at 10:51 PM GMT •
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For my humanities project I have chosen the Great Wall of China and used the guided question of Why Was The Great Wall of China built? I am super nervous about this assignment as well because I’m not sure how good my board Is, how much of the Information I have Is right, If I have answered my guided question correctly and many other things. one BIG thing for me Is If I will be able to answer people's questions without stammering and stumbling like an Idiot. My project was hard to do (cut myself seven times just trying to make the Great Wall of China model out of foam blocks.) but It's fun and looks way cool.
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Article posted April 2, 2012 at 10:32 PM GMT •
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Well, the disection of a chicken wing wasn't all that bad. I had fun when I did it and thought it was the coolest thing ever. I wasn't afraid to touch it and I used bare hands instead of gloves, which everyone in my team thought was the grossest thing ever. But to feel it in your hands and to move it was the coolst thing ever. to see what the muscles looked like, how they connected and everything was just so epic. i wouldn't mind disecting something else, as long as I know it's dead and can not come back and bite me. I thought that the disection did teach me what it was supposed to teach me because I got to see how it worked, what caused it to work and stuff like that, which is what we were supposed to learn. and besides, I got to have fun while doing it.
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Article posted March 20, 2012 at 02:08 AM GMT •
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Blame game
You know it didn’t happen that way
But you still want to play.
The Blame Game is easy.
But to you, it might sound cheesy.
Just do something wrong.
And point the blame to someone else, you’ll feel real strong.
Hit the x on someone else
Maybe Libby, or maybe Chelse.
You know it didn’t happen that way,
But keep playing, it’s ok.
But let me be the one to say.
There will be a day when you pay.
Not every game ends well.
And not every game is swell.
There is a price
When you live with mice.
It just can’t go any other way.
Fast approaches does that day.
You know things didn’t end like that.
But they are the mice, and you are the cat.
Just make a mess.
And don’t confess.
This game is simply the best.
Before you choose to play,
Are you ready for the price you’ll pay?
For things still can turn around.
And one day you will be found.
By Kacie
Grade 7
well, we all know how the blame game works, right? never do it. it turns back on you like a wild dog. at first it's all sweet and then it gets all mean and bites you. perfect game isn't it?
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I sat there in my closet,
Crying at what I couldn’t have.
A perfect life with nothing to fear,
But this was something I could never have.
I cried and broke my heart many times over.
I was trying not to blow my cover.
I wanted it all the end,
The hardship, pain and suffering.
So I came up with the perfect plan,
Of this there was no bluffing.
I would sit there in the snow,
Until my tears begun to froze.
I would sit there forever,
Till I couldn’t feel my toes.
I would end it all in a quiet snow,
It seemed something nice to do.
But then, as I sat there crying,
There came along you.
You looked me in the eyes,
And held out your hand.
You smiled and you nodded,
Giving me a friendly command.
“Get up and walk again” you said
“ there is nothing to fear.
Sit her any longer
And you’ll never know who was really near.
“ you may be sad and frustrated,
Over things that you can not have.
But these are things that are impossible,
But they are something everyone had to have.”
As I sat there is the snow,
Listening to you.
I came to realize,
That what you said was true.
But still I could not walk again,
I wasn’t strong enough.
I wasn’t ready to face my fears,
Not when I knew I’d have if rough.
“ I will help you in what you need to do,
But please stand up and walk again.
Foryou life is much to precious to you.”
I shook my head and sat there,
Not wanting a scene 2.
I just sat there is the snow,
Watching to see what you might do.
You did not walk away,
You just sat there with me.
“we all do not wish to go on,
In some point in our lives.
But we all must remember,
That people do not want us gone.
We hit a fork in the road,
But it’s easy to turn back.
when you build a tower of worries,
it becomes a leaning stack.
So please get up and walk again,
For life is not so bad.
Get up and walk again,
And realize what you never knew you had.”
I nodded and stood up, wobbling at first.
And I thought it was a miracle.
I had gotten up and walked again, and I didn’t feel worse.
But you were no longer there,
Just a figment in the snow.
I wanted to call out to you,
Wondering where you could possibly go.
You never came back,
And I kept on walking.
You never showed up,
But I missed you and your talking.
But I will always remember,
If I hit the fork in the road.
To get up and start walking,
For that is what I have been told.
By Kacie
Grade 7
And yet another picture that I drew. I have to say that this is one of the pictures that I am pretty proud of. as I have said before, drawing is a way of expressing my feelings and emotions. iu tend to draw better when I have an emotion inside me. and if you say anything about the picture and starting calling me out on it, I will be very mad, not totally angry, but mad and hurt because of it. I don't feel like this everyday, so no calling me out on it ok?
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Happy Little Accidents
Don’t worry about making mistakes, there are none to be made.
A Happily little accident is easily displayed.
But when they are made don’t be afraid.
Just make up a reason why.
The grass is greener than green because it was in the sun too long.
The sky is light blue because of the white clouds.
I’m wearing a my shirt backwards because I don’t like crowds.
A happy little accident, that’d what it is.
A slight little mess up is not the cause.
A misplacement of the imagination caused for relaxation.
Yes, just a happy little accident… and one very dark blob of green paint.
By kacie
This poem is based on the quote from Jordan W.( his last name is way too long to spell.) The Quote would be 'there are no such things as mistakes, just happy little accidents.'. that's where the title of the poem came from, so yeah. It wasn't one of my best poems ever, I admit, but it's still pretty good.
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Article posted February 28, 2012 at 12:17 AM GMT •
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Ok, so I have started reading a new book from Patrick Carmen and it is called Trackers.It is the coolest book I have read so far.The book is pretty much like an interview with the main character and some person names H.Ganz.The story is about how the main character, Adam Henderson, is being interviewed because I guess he was suspected for committing a crime of some sort, they were a little shaky on the details.Anyway, he's telling this H.Ganz guy about how he formed a group called Trackers and how he created all these gadgets and stuff.The book is very cool because it lets you watch videos that go along with the book.The book gives you passwords and you type them in and get to see the videos, get new locations, play the game called Glyph master and see his gadgets.It's awesome!The website is http://trackersinterface.com/ and even if I give you the first password, I won't be giving much away because it's not giving what happens in the book away.However, I advise you to read this book and watch the videos.span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> Type that in and watch the sample of what the Trackers do.I just had to share this because its awesome news and I can't help it.
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Article posted February 17, 2012 at 01:23 AM GMT •
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I saw this video on Mr. G's class blog and I just had to share it. there is nothing more creepy and awesome like an octapus moving in a Korean dish. This is something people actually eat, no joke.
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The Blue Bird
Above the tall green tree
against the big blue sky
on top of a soft white cloud
from north to far south
despite the freezing cold and warm sun
between the earth and space
inside the big wide clearing
by the yellow sun
around the world again
among the living things
as small as you and me
across the great prarie
along the blowing wind
pver the dusty valley
past the great blue ocean
without a knowing view
near a fast passed breeze.
by Kacie
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Article posted February 8, 2012 at 12:44 AM GMT •
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So, we're writing about good books we have read. well, most of the books thathave been reading are various Manga books- Japanese comic books that are read from back to front- and they are hard to describe or distinguish from good or bad. so, I’ll tell you about two books that I haven't finished yet that do not fit into the Manga category. the two books are City Of Fallen Angels and The Clockwork Prince. both books were written by my favorite author, Cassandra Clare, and are both the next books in two of my favorite series. City Of Fallen Angels isthe 4th books in The Mortal Instruments Series and The Clockwork Prince is the 2nd book in The Infernal Devices. I like these two books because of the humor and how Clare makes them seem real and really leaves you wanting more of the story. Not to mention, The Clockwork Prince is part of the prequel to the series that the City Of Fallen Angels book is in and it takes place in Old England where as COFA (City Of Fallen Angels) takes place in what seems like present day New York.I really recommend these two books. and, if anyone who knows me really well doesn't already know, my favorite characters in these two books have many things in common, such as humor. my favorite character in TCP ( The Clockwork Prince) is Will Harrandale because he had a big sense of humor, knows how to use sarcasm at all the right times, and he can do al this while hiding the secret of his life. my favorite character in COFA (City Of Fallen Angels) would be José Lightwood, because he knows how to use sarcasm as well, and has a sense of humor. he also is, like most guys, not one to show when he's scared and doesn't want to admit that he needs help. he battles with his feelings, and I think that's another thing that I like about him is how he does it because I know I do it a to too, but I don't think I do it very well and I am curious to see how that works out for him. These books are just so interesting.
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Article posted February 2, 2012 at 02:52 AM GMT •
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All right, for the assighment to write about anything, I'm going to be sharing a story I wrote in either 4th or 5th grade, but I don't remember which so don't ask me which one it was. Anyway, if your fans of the TV show Bakugan Battle Brawlers, then your probably going to ike this. If not, then whatever. I feel like sharing it. so, here it is.
“Vroom. Vroom.” Shunsaid zooming his Octo man action figure around in the air. Play time outside in the park was always quiet, that is until Dan runs down the sidewalk screaming and yelling.
“Ah yeah! I’m gonna play on the swings and jump off the jungle gym!” Dan screams then stops as he sees the nifty Octo man action figure in Shun’s hands.
“Is that an Octo man action figure?” Dan asks running over to Shun.
“Yeah, why?” Shun asks putting the action figure down on the dirty ground.
“Can I see it?” Dan asks reaching for it.
“No! It’s my action figure!” Shunscreams pulling the toy away from Dan’s greasy hands. He had obviously finished eating a hamburger from McDonalds.
“Come on Shun I just want to see it.” Dan says making another attempt to get the action figure.
“No!” Shun screams getting up off the ground.
Dan springs up and grabs the action figure. Shun pulls it back. Dan tackles Shun to the ground “let me see your action figure!” Dan screams wrestling with Shun as he kicks and pulls on the action figure.
“No! It’s my action figure! You can’t see it!” Shun screams back kicking Dan in the knees.
“Just let me see it!” Dan screams and reaches for the toy for the third time.
“No!” Shun screamed again.
Dan grabs Shun’s arm and sinks his teeth into Shun’s skin.
“Owwww! Mommy! Mommy! Help me! Owwww! Get off!” Shun screeches.
Dan doesn’t let go, instead he sinks his teeth in farther. Now blood is running off of Shun’s arm and dripping on the ground. Dan and Shun’s mother run over. Dan’s mom grabs Dan and pulls him off of Shun. Shun gets up and runs to his mom, tears running down his cheeks.
“Daniel kuso! What are you doing!” Dan’s mom asks him, but Dan was not giving up. He wanted to see that action figure and he was going to do it even if it meant the rest of the day in the time-out corner. He was determined to get a look at that action figure. He lunged toward Shun. Shun shrank into a protective hug from his mom. Dan grabs the arm with the action figure and tugs. Shunscreams and then turns around and tackles Dan to the ground. His mother immediately pulls him off of Dan and then pulls him back. Dan’s mom picks Dan up and pulls him back. Shun is hugging his mom.
“Daniel, give me an answer now or its two hours in the time out corner!”
“Let me see your action figure Shun!” Dan screamed completely ignoring his mom.
“Dan is that what this is all about! Come on I’ll get you an Octo man action figure tomorrow. Now come on mister!”
Dan wasn’t moving, instead he made a third attempt and lunged at Shun. He lunged and grabbed him pulling the action figure out of Shun’s hands. Shungrabbed it back. Something fell onto the floor and Shun looked down. It was the head of his Octo man action figure. Dan didn’t waste anytime. He gabbed the action figure from Shun’s hand and looked at it triumphantly only to find the head gone.
“You broke my action figure!” Shun screamed at Dan
“Where did the head go?” Dan asked, looking around.
“It’s on the floor! Thanks a lot Daniel! You owe me a new one!” Shuncried out grabbing the beheaded action figure from Dan as he picked up the head before running off. He ran right past his mother and straight for home. Dan stared at his feet, dumbfounded. Dan’s mom grabbed Dan by the arm and walked off with Dan sniffling behind her. He was in trouble now. He knew it. He was getting it big time.
Six years later…
“Hey grandpa I’m going to the park!” Shun called down from his room. Before he left he looked over at his dresser. On top of it was a beheaded action figure which Dan broke the head off when they were 5. Shun looked at his arm. The scar was still there. He was beginning to wonder whether it would be there forever.
“Your not going any where until you finish your ninja training!” Shun’s grandfather called up shaking Shun from his thoughts. Would he ever get some time to himself? Would he ever get some time away from ninja training or was he stuck with it? He was with his grandfather now and the old kook would pester him for the rest of his life about ninja training. That was final.
“Fine, but afterwards I’m going to the park grandpa.” Shun said zooming down the stairs. He had his bakugan holder strapped to his belt. He slipped off his shoes and placed the holder into one of his shoes.He faced his grandfather letting him know that he was ready.
Ninja training lasted for an hour or so. Shun grabbed his shoes and strapped his holder, with a bakugan in each slot, onto his belt and ran out the door.He practically flew to the park.
"What's up Dan?Are you ready to be defeated for the 12th time?You’re going down." Shun challenged Dan.
"Oh yeah Shun?We'll just see about that!"Dan challenged back
Shun and Dan pulled out a card and held it up "field open!" they shouted in chorus.A stadium opened up and the sky turned into bright vibrant colors of reds, blues, greens, and blacks. "Gate card set!" they sang again together. “BAKUGAN BRAWL!” they screamed throwing one of their three bakugan down.
“Ventas Ravenoied stand!” Shunscreamed releasing a raven like creature with a body the color of teal blue or was it teal green?
“Pyres Saurus stand!” Dan screamed unleashing his warrior dinosaur like creature with a body of red and yellow.
“Battle begin!” they shouted forgetting the real words because of their excitement that was building. If Dan beat Shun in this battle he would move up at least five spots higher than he was now. If Shun won this battle then it would prove to Dan that he could, well, beat almost anyone at bakugan and was truly number one. He was on the ball once again and it felt good. He had let it go for two days and he had slipped lower than first place.
“Ability activate! Wind storm!” Shuncried out. He blew back Dan’s backugan. The battle went on quickly like this with Shun in the lead.
“Face it Dan! Your toast and I’m number one!” Shuncalled out hoping Dan would give up. No chances of that though. Dan was very challenging when it came to things like a bakugan battle. This is the time I need to use my ninja mind control powers! I will make Dan eat 5 needles and then pick his nose and eat it! Then I will make him bite his tongue. Oh thank you grandfather for this useful lesson! Shun pushed into Dan’s mind and concentrated hard. Dan reached into his pocket and pulled out five needles, which came out of no where, and put them in his mouth, swallowed them, bit his tongue, and picked a really large, snot covered burger from his nose and shoved it in his mouth. He then screamed out something that Shun was surprised at “Thank you grandfather! I love you AND I LOVE YOU SKYRESS! BABY I’M HOME!” Dan practically shouted it. Skyress heard this and then popped out of her spot in Shun’s holder.
“Shun did you do what I think you did?” she asked Shun with scorn in her voice. Shun wasn’t listening, instead he stood wide eyed and Dan began coughing up blood. The needles had scared or cut his throat. Either way it was bad. Dan fainted and had left a pool of blood around him. Skyress turned to the mess.
“Apparently my question is answered. Shun what have I told you about that kind of power? I told you that you could seriously hurt some one and what have you done? You have seriously hurt some one! Why don’t you listen to me?” skyress nagged, which wasn’t like her.
Shun never did answer her questions and completely ignored her nagging, instead he stood there dumbfounded at the fact that he could have possibly killed Dan, his best frienemy. Skyress didn’t like the idea of him ignoring her so she summoned up all of her strength, that she had cooped up in her ball form, and then pushed Shun forward only a centimeter, but even that got him moving “Dan! Dan, are you all right? Dan!”
“Oh, so now you care!” Skyress screamed at him as he ran to Dan. shun, shocked and teary eyed, if any one knew he had killed a 9 year old he would be sent to juvey and that was just some place he didn’t feel like going to at the age of 10. It was some place he never wanted to go; at any particular age, If he thought about it.
So, yeah. when I was in elementary school, I was randomly surfing the google images of Bakugan, and found a picture like this and then got to wondering what it was like for them when they were kids, causing me to write this story. I do watch the show, but not a lot. I like the action and the plotline. So, this is my little spin on things. I have no idea what to call it, maybe a fan fiction or something. Anyway, yeah. Oh, and for those of you who are liking Calm Waters so far, I will be posting another story called Diaries of Jane. So, keep checking for it, although I don't know when it will post.
-Kacie-
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Article posted January 23, 2012 at 05:20 PM GMT •
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Ok, so some tools that poets use would be their own personal experiences. Since I am a poet writer, this is something I can relate to. I write my poems based on my life and the feelings that I am feeling at that moment. other poems, like narrative poems, are based off of stories they might have heard or maybe even made up themselves. others tools would be what they want to reflect back to the reader. if the writer wants the poem to sound funny and make the readers laugh and have fun with the poem, then they have to think about what they would write in order for this to happen. as a person who likes to write and read poetry as much as I do, this subject was easy for me a little bit, and it also got me thinking of ways to make my poems more interesting and giving the feelings that I want a crossed to readers. some examples of a poem would be a line from the poem Sarah Stout Would Not Take The Garbage Out. That poem might exaggerate the consequences of not taking the garbage out, but it does get the point of how important taking the garbage out is.
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Article posted January 19, 2012 at 04:27 PM GMT •
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Ah quotes. My favorite thing to look up on the Internet and keep in mind for day to day life. If I were to pick a quote from all of them, I would have to choose the one from Albert Einstein. " the important thing is not to stop questioning. Curiosity has its own reason for existing." what I interpret this as is to keep being curious because being curious is what helps us learn. if we don't ask the question Why? then we would probably have never known why we got our name, why the bugs are small but strong or why we have to learn. curiosity is one of my favorite things as a writer because it lets me explore horizons and expand as a writer. if you ask me the question as to why one of my characters in a story has blue hair, I can say why not. I don't need to go into detail with it. it could be a positive attitude in someone's life because it lets us explore and open our minds. I think it would have an impact on the world considering that it does let us explore and learn the way we do, or at least it helps us learn and explore. So, after all of this, I like this quote.
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Article posted January 14, 2012 at 02:12 AM GMT •
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My goals for 2012? Are you seriously asking me about them? I'm not a fan of making goals, nor talking about them. I think that my goals would be to finish my editing on my novel and maybe even send it into an editor and have it inspected. My other goal would be to move up in my band chair to at least third chair instead of fourth, that way I can play the 1st clarinet piece in band like I want to. So far that's all I have and they aren't really that big. I feel like I am one of those people who don’t have to think about any goals, nor set them, just go for them. Call me whatever you will for this thought, but I'm serious.
Article posted January 14, 2012 at 02:12 AM GMT •
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Article posted December 22, 2011 at 03:49 PM GMT •
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-Beat-
“No!No!GO AWAY!GO AWAY!You left me!”I screamed, shaking the bars of the Iron Gate in the front as I watched my brother walk up to the gate toward me.I must have been screaming aloud, because I heard my friends trying to shake me awake.I wanted to wake up, but I couldn’t open my eyes.
“Beat!Beat!”I heard Lucca whisper in my ear.I felt the hands of Storm on my shoulder, trying to shake me awake.I couldn’t wake up.
“GO AWAY!”I cried, my hands gripping the iron bars and my head leaning on the space between the two.
“Beat!”Lucca whispered again.I opened my eyes, tears streaking down my cheeks.I whipped them away quickly.I’ve had horror dreams like this since I was a little kid.Every time I would scream and cry in my sleep, my parents would shake me awake and try to calm me down.The dream itself wouldn’t be what makes me cry or freak out, I could deal with the dreams.The reason I’d freak out is because my dreams become reality.I can basically predict or change the future through my dreams.What just happened in my dream has actually just happened.My brother was at that gate now, the gate had been shaken, but I wasn’t seen and I wasn’t there now.
“Beat!Are you alright?”Lucca asked.She brushed my bangs away from my face, just like any sister would.
“I’m fine.”I mumbled, looking away from her.It was embarrassing to be cry in front of anyone, let alone Lucca.I felt the tears keep coming, non-stop even after I was awake.My whole body was shaking; I could not calm myself down at all.
“Why were you screaming?”Storm asked me.
“Oh?I was screaming.I’m sorry.I had a dream that my brother was at the gate and I didn’t want him here.I said, groggily and a little nervous.Storm then dashed out of the room.Maybe he knew my secret.That was ok with me, as long as no one else knew.
-Storm-
As I dashed down the corridor and out into the front walkway, leading me up to the gate.Sure enough, beat’s brother, duke, was there at the gate, looking dazed.The gatekeeper there looked shocked at something, maybe the sight of Duke at the gate.I walked up to the gatekeeper on duty, nervous at what would happen since I wasn’t at my post.
“Hey!”I said, coming up behind him.
“You’re supposed to be on duty, Storm.”He said.
“The queen needed to talk to me.What happened here?You seem shocked and frazzled.”I said.
“Someone was trying to get past the gate, but I couldn’t see anyone.”
“An invisible person, huh?Maybe he was trying to get in. he has mind powers you know.”I said, picking on Beat’s brother just to see his face.I didn’t like Duke either.He was mainly the cause of Beat’s gloomy and antisocial personality.No one could make him smile or laugh, no matter how hard they tried.
“Why the heck am I here?”Duke asked, bewildered at how he had somehow woken up here.
“Well, I think you have a bad case of sleepwalking on your hands.Is this the first time you’ve woken up in a different place?”I asked.He shook his head.I nodded.
“ what about your post, Storm?” the gatekeeper on duty asked, pointing out that this probably was the only time I hadn’t been on my post whenI was supposed to.I couldn’t help it if Lucca had dragged me to beat’s room when I was on duty.
“I’ll get to that in a second.Hey, duke, I have a game.It’s called ‘run from here before Beat sees you’.Doesn’t that sound fun?”I sounded like an adult that is annoyed with their kid.
“I already know that game, and there is no way I would play it.And it’s Sonic, not Duke.”Snobby little kid.
“Whatever, just go back to wherever you came from.I think Kyler might be worried about you.” I said, giving him my best ‘so what’ look. He turned and then walked off. The gatekeeper gave me a look that told me to get to my post and get to work.
Article posted December 22, 2011 at 03:49 PM GMT •
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Article posted December 15, 2011 at 11:58 PM GMT •
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During the Wiki project I felt very overwhelmed. We had so much to do in so little time! It was hard to find out what others had done and then build off that later on. It took a while for our group to get on it's feet because we couldn't decided which poem to do. It was hard for me because I kept feeling lost every time something new was thrown at me. I had never worked on a Wiki before so it was confuseing for me. Other than the little complications i think the project went well. The group worked well together and I made some new friends I think.
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Article posted December 15, 2011 at 11:53 PM GMT •
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Our Greek unit in Hummantites is huge! We have fuides between groups and lots of activities and expectations to fufill. During this, we are also expected to know something about Greece as well. Here's what I know about Greek history.
A long time ago, there was a place called Troy that the Greeks were at war with. They couldn't find a way to get into the city, so they came up with an idea. They built this wooden horse statue with Greeks hiding inside. The people of Troy thought this was a gift and they took the horse into their city. The Greeks hiding inside came out and faught against Troy, destroying it.
What we are doing in Hummanities right now is some activities that test our knowledge of Greece,while also learning about Greek. We write down the information and turn it in. After class we do a thing called 'fates' where you either roll dice or spin a spinner to decide how many points you get at the end of the day. During the day we get points depending on how good we did an activity. Things haven't started heating up yet, but it will become interesting after break!
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Article posted December 3, 2011 at 12:36 AM GMT •
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Ok, so I got this idea from Jamiem in Mr. G’s class in Washington. She started a story with pictures, so here is mine.Or, my character profile at least.
Kyler:
I'm creative, but I don't like people analyzing me at all. I ike to listen to claissical music, but sometims I listen to modern music. My sister is too annoying for me sometimes. I'm 13 and I don't live with my parents.
Tracy:
Hi! I'm Tracy. I'm Kyler's younger sister. He says I'm too annoying to handle. I'm too cute not too handle! I like to look my best, even though it's not always that easy. I'm 12 years old and spunky.
Lucca:
I'm Lucca. I'm one of the warrors at Calm Waters. There is nothing that makes me angrier than somone trying to 'take care of their job' on my territory. their 'job' is to get rid of the queen of Calm Waters. What part of Calm do they not understand? I'm not afraid to fight if need be.
Duke:
Hi, I'm Duke. My nickname is Sonic because I like to run fast. I like to try and make people laugh, even if my jokes aren't funny. My friends are Kyler and Tracy. my brother gets on my nerve, so he is now in Calm Waters. I'm 14 years old and live on my own.
Beat:
I'm Beat. my brother, Sonic, left me here in Calm Waters. It's supposed to be a place for kids who have no one to care for them, but it's far from it. It's this crazy place with gaurds and warriors and people without faces. I'm 13 and antisocial. The only friends I have so far are Lucca and Storm. Try and get me to smile, I dare you.
Storm:
What's up? I'm Storm, one of the gate keepers of Calm Waters. I make sure no one gets past the gates, unless they have permission to enter. There have only been a few incidents when people have gotten past the gate, but they don't happen often. I am calm and know how to keep my head when I'm under pressure.
and yes I made sure that I could use them. These pictures are useable and I'm sure I won't get in trouble. So, tell me how you like my pictures and I'll try to do my story. Kacie signing off! Oh, and if the pictures don't show up, please let me know and I'll try to fix it somehow.
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Article posted November 19, 2011 at 12:01 AM GMT •
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Forget about all the things that we can’t be thankful for, like the fact that life isn’t always fare when we want it to be. Forget the fact that ypu don’t like your life whenever you get mad at the fact that something didn’t go your way. This month is the month for giving thanks. I have three special things to be thankful for. 1. I’m thankful for the fact that I have the ability to speak my mind when the time comes, although not all people think it’s for the best. I’m thankful for these because I stand up for myself and others when I speak my mind, and I don’t care if you disagree with me if I spoke my mind for the best. 2. I’m thankful for my ability to write as well as I do. I’m thankful for this because I can write things that change people, make people laugh or just plane entertain people. I set words in stone and I write the life of people who don’t exist but feel as if they do. Who knows, maybe my characters might exist and I don’t even know it! 3. I’m thankful for the fact that I have people who love me, even though they don’t sometimes feel as if they do. I might have fights with them some days and tell them that their mean and I don't like them and everything else. I know they love me and I have that to be thankful for because I know that not very many people have that in their lives.I feel for people like that. So for this thanksgiving, try to forget the things that you can’t be thankful for and think only of the things that you CANbe thankful for.
Article posted November 19, 2011 at 12:01 AM GMT •
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Article posted November 8, 2011 at 12:27 AM GMT •
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The most recent mystery story I have read is The Séance by Joan Lowery Nixon. The book has won the Edgar Allen Poe award and is about a séance gone wrong.
I had just done a writing prompt for the mystery unit and I think it might have made an awesome mystery story! I have even been told that it was traumatizing. Hope you like it. A Never Ending Circle By Kacie Piper hadn’t wanted to do it, in fact she didn’t even mean too. But the feeling inside her mind had made her do it. She had to have that darn necklace. Isis, her best friend in the world, had said words that rang throughout Piper’s head before she died. “Lies are a never ending circle.” She had said. Piper’s heart ached at the thought of Isis. It wasn’t her fault! It was her darn selfish side, the one that always got to her and took control of her whenever it wanted something. The necklace that she had wanted was extremely magnificent and she wanted it, no questions asked.
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Article posted November 8, 2011 at 12:20 AM GMT •
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My thoughts about the bogging have changed slightly, I will admit, from the comment on number 7 of my seven random facts. Though I do still think they are a waist of time, they are fun. Were these blogging prompts worthwhile? Yes, I would say they were. They are fun, you know. Anyway, a new writing thing we could do would be ‘ what is your peaceful place or what comes to mind when you hear the words peaceful place?’ that would be one that would be good.
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Article posted November 2, 2011 at 03:27 AM GMT •
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I've got two things I need checked, or given feedback on. Think you could help?
It seems meaningless to remember the little things that happen in our lives. I have three reasons and experiences as to why I always remember what the people fighting in war have done for me and everyone around me.
Because of all of these reasons and experiences, I am happy to say that I always remember the little things, the big things and the random thing in between. My life is what helps me remember that lots of people have it a lot worse than me and that is what the people who are fighting in the war are trying to help with. That is why I always remember to acknowledge the things that have been given to me.
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Article posted October 21, 2011 at 01:13 AM GMT •
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My opinion on the campaign fight is something that is entirely mine. From what I have read, or actually watched, on http://www.cnn.com/studentnews/ was interesting, I have to say, but uncalled for. the campaign was the main event. basically, it's about this group of people running for President. These two people, Mitt and another man, get in a fight. They are talking over themselves and it's a big mess. Mitt and the other person didn’t need to get into a fight! The least they could have done was hear each other out instead of talking and yelling overtop of each other. They were also rude, but everyone has to do what they have to do to win, I suppose. I like this website because it gives you what’s happening in our world today and it makes it fun and interesting to learn about those problems. Usually I wouldn’t be too thrilled on watching the news or learning about news, I have a current event in Spanish coming up to for Cuba that I’m not too thrilled about, but this video and website makes it fun. http://www.cnn.com/studentnews/
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Article posted October 12, 2011 at 02:26 AM GMT •
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Tender hearts, river of tears.
Tender hearts are everywhere you look. Even in the criminals that line the streets or the people who have no homes and are fighting for survival.
Not everyone is born perfect.
Not every life is easy.
I believe that if we step our game up we can change everyone’s life.
I believe that the good, tender hearts can be freed.
I believe that the river of tears, that everyone has been crying, can finally be dried and barely used again, not because of fear, but because of happiness and stress and loss.
Crime will not happen as often as they do now, if we free the tender hearts.
Less people will be fighting to survive and will have a home, if we free the tender hearts.
More people will be having second thoughts about death and will choose to let the living live and let themselves live as well.
Love will overrule the hatred and put out the fire that hatred and racism have started.
Why can’t my dreams, of a better world, come true?
Why does every problem have to turn into a fight?
Why can’t we live in peace instead of fear?
Why can’t we look at the world through the eyes of peace instead of the eyes of hatred?
I want and hope to see a world living in peace and not fear and hatred, before I die or after I die.
Please do it for the sake of the world and the new generation.
By Kacie
Believe it or not, this was actually supposed to be a poem, a random clarity of my imagination, yadda, yadda, yadda. When I wrote the title, I knew I wanted it to be a poem. Problem was, I couldn’t think of a poem or anything poetic! So I just started writing something that went based on the title a little and BAM! I got this. Interesting isn’t it?
Article posted October 12, 2011 at 02:26 AM GMT •
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Article posted October 12, 2011 at 02:20 AM GMT •
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The best book I have read so far? That’ a hard one! I would have to say it would be the book Another Faust by Daniel and Dina Nayeri. It’s about these five kids who wanted something really badly that they thought would make life better… and then suddenly went missing. They later learn, after living with their governess Madame Vileroy for 15 years, that they didn’t really need those things. I haven’t finished it yet, so I’m really interested to see how it ends, but I know that there is a lot of conflict and mystery and even suspense. The rating is for 14+ but it’s a really good book and I recommend it to those who love mystery, suspense, conflict and trickery. If any of you have read it, which I doubt any of you have, then please don’t tell me how it ends, although I’m almost done with it since I am listening to it on CD( I know bad me.). I have never heard of these authors, until I found this book, but so far, I like them. If any of you have any book suggestions, please let me know which books you recommend!
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Article posted October 10, 2011 at 12:39 AM GMT •
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Ok, so this poem isn’t one of mine, but it was from an article for a necklace that my mom found. I loved the way this poem is written and I wanted to share it. This poem is a poem for hard times or if you have lost someone or something dear to you. I just love the way it’s written.
I Am With You Still
I give you this one thought to keep
I am with you still- do not weep.
I am a thousand winds that blow.
I am the diamond glints on the snow.
I am the sunlight on ripened grain.
I am the gentle autumn’s rain.
When you awaken in the mornings hush,
I am the swift uplifting rush
Of quiet birds in circled flight.
I am the swift stars that shine at night.
Do not think of me as gone-
I am with you still- in each new dawn.
By anonymous.
I so wish I new who made this poem. Whatever, they can remain unknown.
Article posted October 10, 2011 at 12:39 AM GMT •
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Article posted October 5, 2011 at 02:49 AM GMT •
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Choices
Inspired by the book If I Stay by Gayle Forman
What if I had the choice?
What if I had the voice?
Would I live or would I die?
Are the prices way too high?
What would I gain?
What would I lose?
I have the right to choose.
If I stay or if I go.
I am the only one to know.
What would I choose?
What would I lose?
What would it take,
To make this choice I have to make?
What if I had the choice?
What if I had the voice?
By Kacie
Grade 6
Yes I wrote this in 6th grade, but when I heard about this assignment, I just had to choose one of my poems and when I saw this one… well I just had to use it. I have made some 7th grade poems, about three of them in fact, but I didn’t want to share them because they are sorrowful, sort of, and I just thought this one was good. Hope you like it and please do not take this poem. I know how copy and paste works, and since none of my poems are published, yet, except one from 5th grade, I would like to keep my poems as my creation, if you don’t mind.
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Article posted September 30, 2011 at 03:03 AM GMT •
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I would have to say the best part was the lake observation because you got to see little creatures and enjoy a quiet time by the lake. I like calm moments by water, like lakes or the creek by my house. The activity that I enjoyed the most would be the Oh Deer one. I liked that because I thought it was fun. What I learned from the WHOLE field trip is that nature is pretty and it had to go through a whole lot more trouble to survive than we do. I also learned that the outdoors are a great place to be when you need some inspiration or quiet time. It’s also a good place for a field trip!
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Article posted September 30, 2011 at 02:40 AM GMT •
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I have just been given a list of books from a reading teacher in Rode Island. Based on the list and the video on one of the links, some of those books would be banned and probably many others. The First Amendment allows us to read any book that we want and write anything we want. The Power of Speech fits into this because some people, I know I am one of them, speak their feelings in the books that they write. If we are not allowed to let those feelings be shown through writing or let are imaginations run wild, then we are in a box. I wouldn’t want to live in a box where thinking outside the box wasn’t allowed. Banned books week allows us to speak out. NO BOOK SHALL BE BANNED AND NO IMAGINATION SHALL BE LOCKED UP! that is my thoughts about banned books.
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Article posted September 22, 2011 at 02:49 AM GMT •
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What the chef in the first video did wrong was he multiplied 13 by 7 and ended up getting 28, but the problem is that he divided the numbers wrong. 13 times 7 isn’t 28, it isn’t even close to 28 when you add them together. 7 times 4 is 28. if you were to do 13 by 7 you would get 91. 7 times 3 is 21 and 7 times one is 7. so it you take that 2 in 21 and you put it above the one in 13 and then add that 7 to the 2 you get 91. The thing that the person in video two is the exact same thing. He did it wrong. 14 times 5 isn’t even 25. I learned the 5 times 5 is 25 in , like, 2nd grade and this person is clearly older than me! 14 time 5 is 70. these videos are great, but they teach kids how to do math incorrectly. Now, I’m in 7th grade and I know that the chef and the old man are wrong, but if I were in 1st grade and below I would think they were correct, which goes to show that not everything is very useful.
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Article posted September 13, 2011 at 01:05 AM GMT •
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The dumbest, scariest and most embaressing thing I have done isplaying the game we elementary kids at my old school made up. You had to stand at the far end of the swings and wait until the person on the swing in front of you left an opening to run through. Then you had to go and dash to the space between the two swings, the one you ran through and next one coming up. The object of the game was to get to the other side of the swing set WITHOUT getting hit by the person on the swing. I, however, wasn’t so lucky and got smacked in the face twice by the swingers.
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Article posted September 9, 2011 at 12:04 AM GMT •
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I’m a Rachel’s challenge member and have been since 6th grade. I think the presentation is needed. Tragic things happen in this world, but it’s amazing how she changed her school and other people before she died. I think it’s needed because, from personal experience, I know what it feels like when people don’t treat you the way you want to be treated and that it doesn’t feel good when you treat someone else bad because they treated you badly. It hurts. No one likes a bully and no one likes to be bullied. I know, and so do four of my friends, some teachers and the councilor, that I took a lot away from that presentation. I cried hard because I knew that I needed to change. I had taken my fear and my little bubble of solitude that I had built in elementary school with me to middle school because I was scared of being picked on. I don’t want to be scared anymore and I don’t want to be mad at my life or people that treated me badly anymore. That is what I took away from the presentation, the fact that I need to change and speak up when I am scared. I don’t think that we should change anything about the presentation. Whether it was effective is a different story. I’m not sure if it was effective. Not that it isn’t, it’s just that I haven’t seen it yet. I do think that it will be effective, however. It has touched me and effected me and I am sure it will effect others. Yes it was worthwhile. We need that little extra push in our lives and I wish I had actually had that push in elementary school. Rachel’s challenge is the best thing about my life.
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Article posted August 29, 2011 at 09:11 PM GMT •
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1.I am a writer, a book worm, and a singer!
2. Drawing is not my forte, even though I like to draw sometimes. When I draw, my pictures come out obscured and funky. My people are always cartoon like.
3.I have a poem published from 5th grade.
4.I like the bands Owl City and The Ready Set.
5.I like the book Death Note.
6.I like the color black and I love to wear black some days, but I admit it is hot.
7.I don’t do blogging or personal websites. I think they are a waste of good time.
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About the Blogger
I write almost everyday, and would never give it up. My latest story so far that I'm working on is going to be called Wanderer, but it is not even close to being finished and once it is, i still will have to edit it. I have won a novel contest, which I am so excited about because then all i have to do is edit the novel, find an editor and get it published. I hope to grow up to be an author. I like homework and school, but I do not like the stress of it all, which i find kinda strange. I do not work well in groups, all my teachers and close friends know this fact quite well. My nickname in a Manga club that I joined, located at the East Pikes Peak library, is Silence which fits me pretty well.