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Title: Poetry (04/24/12)
Description: We looked closely at several free verse poems and how the author used sensory language to help the reader visualize. Then we took a persona narrative with a strong emotion and wrote a small moment from it in free verse.

Article posted April 24, 2012 at 01:43 PM GMT • comment • Reads 371

That was a shot!



Racing down the ice,


Sweat trickling down my face,


Motioning for a shot,


The puck taking a victory lap around the net,


My face shown as if playing poker,


Tight hugs from my friends,


I scored!

Article posted April 24, 2012 at 01:43 PM GMT • comment • Reads 371



Article posted April 24, 2012 at 01:46 PM GMT • comment • Reads 48

I-Gift!


So determind to get it,


Wishing with all my might,


Knew I could do it.


Went upstairs all sad,


I had a feeling I was going to get it,


The next second it was in my hand!


My I-pad

Article posted April 24, 2012 at 01:46 PM GMT • comment • Reads 48



Article posted April 24, 2012 at 01:52 PM GMT • comment • Reads 57

Siblings.

another sibling,

yay!

1 year of getting dirty!

1 year of fun!



at the birthday party

mom

revealed...

that it was a girl!

Article posted April 24, 2012 at 01:52 PM GMT • comment • Reads 57



Article posted April 24, 2012 at 01:44 PM GMT • comment • Reads 43

hit the ball

hit it into the outfield

what to expect

i don't know.

The sun is shining in my face

Like a flashlight in my eye.

Adrenalin pumping,

Getting excited.

BOOM!

The ball is hit!

Article posted April 24, 2012 at 01:44 PM GMT • comment • Reads 43



Article posted April 25, 2012 at 02:43 PM GMT • comment • Reads 49

Excitment



It's going through my veins, my adrenaline is pumping as soon as I enter Madison Square Garden.



I see my favorite wrestlers win the matches.



I hope to come again to see my favorite wrestlers win once again.

Article posted April 25, 2012 at 02:43 PM GMT • comment • Reads 49



Article posted April 24, 2012 at 01:57 PM GMT • comment • Reads 101

 Empty Sideline


 


It was last year



The St. Vito's tournament



When the final buzzer went off,



Our sideline was empty.



We won it all!



I said to myself,



"Wow!"



Just wow.



Why wow?



The season before,



Our record was 1-15!

Article posted April 24, 2012 at 01:57 PM GMT • comment • Reads 101



Article posted April 24, 2012 at 01:56 PM GMT • comment • Reads 107

Distracted by the ease



 



The sweet smell of candy



 



The hard core metal crushes the bone



 



My foot meets the platform



 



Each bone squished against the rickets



 



The metal slowy releases back.

Article posted April 24, 2012 at 01:56 PM GMT • comment • Reads 107



Article posted April 24, 2012 at 02:06 PM GMT • comment • Reads 50

Fright



Waking,

Made me scared.

Looking for the signs,

Of strange activity.

When I was at school,

I ran

To the school door

And had to survive the rest of school

frightened

Article posted April 24, 2012 at 02:06 PM GMT • comment • Reads 50



Article posted April 24, 2012 at 01:46 PM GMT • comment • Reads 40

First Show

Legs shaking,

Head twisted,

Uhh Ohh,

What if...

HORSES!

My name!

Now it's...

SHOW TIME!!!

Article posted April 24, 2012 at 01:46 PM GMT • comment • Reads 40



Article posted April 24, 2012 at 02:05 PM GMT • comment • Reads 48

win it all

Article posted April 24, 2012 at 02:05 PM GMT • comment • Reads 48



Article posted April 24, 2012 at 01:55 PM GMT • comment • Reads 47

 Stealer  



He stole my stuff


I do not know why


Do you?


I was really mad


I thought he was my friend


He stole my erasers


I dont think hes my friend anymore


He lies in front of my face


He left to a different school


He's out of my life


And my stuff is back

Article posted April 24, 2012 at 01:55 PM GMT • comment • Reads 47



Article posted April 24, 2012 at 01:57 PM GMT • comment • Reads 47

I felt red hot

red hot mad

when I was

accused

of stealing

a

phone

Article posted April 24, 2012 at 01:57 PM GMT • comment • Reads 47



Article posted April 24, 2012 at 01:53 PM GMT • comment • Reads 50

Spring!



I feel the fresh breeze on my face

I feel the sun beaming on my face

Bees are buzzing around

Ouch!

I see flowers sprouting

It's not summer or fall nor winter

What season is it?



Article posted April 24, 2012 at 01:53 PM GMT • comment • Reads 50



Article posted April 24, 2012 at 07:04 PM GMT • comment • Reads 47

Wow!

No way!

I can’t believe it…

It’s white

It’s a rectangle shape

It has buttons

It has a screen

It can even take pictures

You can play games on it

It’s a...

DSI



Article posted April 24, 2012 at 07:04 PM GMT • comment • Reads 47



Article posted April 24, 2012 at 02:02 PM GMT • comment • Reads 48

Water Slide



Should I go on?

Or should I go somewhere else?

I should go on.

I am on.

Now I have to put on my seat belt.

I am going up.

Now I am scared.

It's going up.

Now it's going down.

Fast

Screaming

Now I am wet.

WATER SLIDE.

Article posted April 24, 2012 at 02:02 PM GMT • comment • Reads 48



Article posted April 26, 2012 at 03:09 PM GMT • comment • Reads 43

First Day...



Excited,

No,

Scared.

No, that's not right, I was feeling brave!

That's how I felt the first day at M.A.S.

In the back seat of the car

Not knowing what to expect

It seemed so lonesome

Teachers getting ready to start the new year

Saw kids running,

Hugging,

Meeting up with friends

I felt all by myself,

No one to lean on



My mom walked me up to my class room

I reached my class room

Took a deep breth,



And walked in

I didn't know what to do

I found my seat

I worked from there

And look at me now!

I feel like M.A.S is my home!

Great friends,

In the school play,

And much more.

Article posted April 26, 2012 at 03:09 PM GMT • comment • Reads 43



Article posted April 24, 2012 at 01:49 PM GMT • comment • Reads 45

Surprise!



Lights off,

On a soft,

Puffy,

Cloud.

Closing my eyes,

About to dream,

Peacefully.



Sleeping,

I hear a Creek.

It stops.



Mind scared,

Body shaking,

Like a cat.



BOOOOOO!

Terrified,

Screamed.



SURPRISE!



Brothers.

Article posted April 24, 2012 at 01:49 PM GMT • comment • Reads 45



Article posted April 24, 2012 at 01:58 PM GMT • comment • Reads 43

falling poem

Article posted April 24, 2012 at 01:58 PM GMT • comment • Reads 43



Article posted April 24, 2012 at 02:12 PM GMT • comment • Reads 48

Scared



Fear controls my body, running around in my veins.


 


I scream in fear, run in the darkness.


 


I escape for another day!

Article posted April 24, 2012 at 02:12 PM GMT • comment • Reads 48



Article posted April 24, 2012 at 01:49 PM GMT • comment • Reads 44

SMELLY AIR



"Ya, TV time,

oh, hi Henry"



"No I don't want to see your butt"



PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPSSSSSBBBBBBBB



Gurgle



Gurgle



Gurgle



"HENRY!, SMACK!



"How did you get it in my eyes"



"My specialty"

Article posted April 24, 2012 at 01:49 PM GMT • comment • Reads 44



Article posted April 24, 2012 at 01:54 PM GMT • comment • Reads 42

Tears ran down my face

Could this place be any better

It felt like home

Georgia.

Article posted April 24, 2012 at 01:54 PM GMT • comment • Reads 42



Article posted April 26, 2012 at 03:08 PM GMT • comment • Reads 75

Near Death Experience





PLEASE EXIT THE DOME!

THE DOME IS COLLAPPSING!



Tention runs through my body.

Fear is holding my body in place.

In a split second, my fun soccer game turns dangerous.



My friend's family and I speed walked to the main exit.



The exit was crowded with panicing people.



My friend pushed me through the revolving doors. People were squished like cockroaches.



I was free.



WHAT A RELIEF!

Article posted April 26, 2012 at 03:08 PM GMT • comment • Reads 75



Article posted April 24, 2012 at 02:08 PM GMT • comment • Reads 184

Chinese



I open my book



My nightmare awaits me



CHINESE



I feel my blood boiling



I see those cursed words



They creep into my brain



Wandering forever in my brain



Ugh, CHINESE

Article posted April 24, 2012 at 02:08 PM GMT • comment • Reads 184



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