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by JK teacher: Mrs. B (Grade 5 - 2011-2012)

Title: 5D - A Stranger Comes (02/22/12)
Description: A stranger comes to your settlement. Why are they there and how do you treat them?

AJ -- A stranger walks into Jafrican

Article posted February 22, 2012 at 11:19 AM GMT+2 • comment (1) • Reads 1099

 


A stranger walks into Jafrican, and we have no choice but to let him enter.

I would first ask for his name and other details about him, such as where he lives… etc. then we would act nice after we know details about him, because he wouldn’t be a stranger. After, I would show him around jafrican, and he may possibly stay so, I would rent him a bed.

The next morning, we would feed him breakfast and give him water so he can fit his needs. He should probably thank us. Finally, we would give him a pack including; a full water bottle, a couple of mangos, and a towel, so he could make his way back to where he lives, covering all his needs.

                                                                This is how we Jafricanians do it…

Article posted February 22, 2012 at 11:19 AM GMT+2 • comment (1) • Reads 1099



MS -- Stranger in river island

Article posted February 22, 2012 at 11:36 AM GMT+2 • comment • Reads 389

If Aneese came to River Island I would let him stay if he wants to. He was come from another island that is called jaffrican. I am sure that we would like to move away from the island with a crazy jaffricanian man that thinks he is the president and want some kind of factory! It should be very hard for Aneese to live there. I’m sure he would like to stay.

After a while He said that he wants stay. I was pretty happy but I’m not sure that everybody else would. Also I don’t think we would have a place for him to sleep. I hope he could stay.

Article posted February 22, 2012 at 11:36 AM GMT+2 • comment • Reads 389



SC -- Stranger in River Island

Article posted February 22, 2012 at 11:25 AM GMT+2 • comment (2) • Reads 376

 


 

 

River Island would eavesdrop on the stranger to see what he has come for, because if he wants to join our settlement than we will let him stay.  There for if he has come to spy on River Island than we will not let him stay.

            This is the third day from eavesdropping. So far we know it is the guy that thinks he is the president of Jafrican, he has come to steel some of our resources like farm animals, crops, wood, etc…

            We will be kind to him but not allow him to do anything in our settlement. We will lend him our boat so that he can go back to his settlement. When we told him about our idea he agreed and said he did not want to stay, he wanted to steel our resources.

            This is how our settlement got rid of the stranger.

Article posted February 22, 2012 at 11:25 AM GMT+2 • comment (2) • Reads 376



SH -- Stranger in Jafrican!

Article posted February 22, 2012 at 11:33 AM GMT+2 • comment (1) • Reads 411

 


In this Paragraph, I will be telling you a story about the stranger who came into our settlement.

     Lea H told me about him. He is from a settlement called “River Island.”  I saw him at night. When I saw him, I was a bit scared because I saw his shadow. When he came into the light, I saw that he had a friendly face. He told me he needed food because River Island ran out of resources, so we gave him some. He didn’t really tell us what his name was. He wanted to keep it a secret. He is a really kind person. We asked him if he wanted to stay and he said he couldn’t.

 

Article posted February 22, 2012 at 11:33 AM GMT+2 • comment (1) • Reads 411



SJ -- Someone walked in to Jafrican

Article posted February 22, 2012 at 11:37 AM GMT+2 • comment (1) • Reads 391

On a dark rainy day, I saw a shadow of a human walking in our garden around the house.
I went out to check who it was but there was nothing out there, all I said that it was an imagination, then went back to continue reading my book. Suddenly, I heard something that had fallen down but this time I went out to check and I found a little girl sitting near the door shivering from the cold weather and saying “Please help me, I am lost and hungry” I quickly got her inside and gave her some food and then took her to the Jafricas most famous doctor then took her to go to sleep.
The next day, she thanked me for being nice and helpful then asked me if she can have a house here in Jafricas houses so I said yes of cores, then I told my friends about her and told her to stay with me until we find her a house, you know the only person that did not care about that is Jamil.

Article posted February 22, 2012 at 11:37 AM GMT+2 • comment (1) • Reads 391



JA -- Stranger to River Island

Article posted February 22, 2012 at 11:34 AM GMT+2 • comment (1) • Reads 427

Today this strange creepy girl came to River Island! It was creepy for all of us! So let me explain exactly what happened…

So normally at 7:30 AM I would be milking the cows, but apparently hula girl wants to do it for me. Hula girl is this strange creepy girl from Hawaii and she came Hawaii because River Island is right next to Hawaii so we get all those “peaceful Hawaiian people” passing over our river. Anyway, I just shout out and run to get Nour. Luckily Nour has his gun so obviously because Nour is into killing stuff and shooting objects and in this case people he was going to shoot Hawaiian girl, but I stopped him in time. Hawaiian girl started shouting and speaking this odd language.

 “Do. You. Know. English?” I spell out clearly for her.

 “Oh yes, I do. I thought you didn’t,” she says.

Apparently Hawaiian girl has a name and it’s Lea. She says she comes from “Mountania.” Nour and I just look at each other suspiciously.

 “LEAVE!” screams Nour “or else.”

 “But I wanted to stay” begs Lea.

 “LEAVE!” screams Nour again getting impatient starting to hold up his gun.

So obviously Hula girl runs into the river and splashes Manuel and she swims away to her so called mountain. Basically it was very scary morning.




 

Article posted February 22, 2012 at 11:34 AM GMT+2 • comment (1) • Reads 427



DE -- A Stranger

Article posted February 22, 2012 at 11:29 AM GMT+2 • comment • Reads 441

Today a stranger came into Mounatania. He was from are enemy tribe River Island. He was wounded and bruised. I asked the engineer what we should do to him. He said “We should keep him until he feels better.” I had different plans for the stranger. My plan was to send him back battered and bruised.
This will warn River Island and Jafrica to stay out of Mountania. Next time anyone steps foot on Mountania he will be executed.

Article posted February 22, 2012 at 11:29 AM GMT+2 • comment • Reads 441



HA1 -- A Stranger on Mountainia

Article posted February 22, 2012 at 11:25 AM GMT+2 • comment (1) • Reads 382

Dear Diary,

Today, something very weird happened, someone discovered our settlement! How, I don’t know, but I will find out. We asked him if he was from another settlement, but sadly he was. He was very sick and he was also wounded, so we decided to keep him until he felt better. We don’t know from where came, and how, but we want to keep him because he sounds friendly. We will ask him if he would like to stay because we need all the help we can get.
The stranger also asked how we got here, and we tell him everything. Well he is kind. I would really really like him to stay, but that isn’t my choice, it is up to all of us. We will decide that next meeting. Well today was a good day, and lets hope it stays like that!

Article posted February 22, 2012 at 11:25 AM GMT+2 • comment (1) • Reads 382



RA -- Stranger in mountania

Article posted February 22, 2012 at 11:34 AM GMT+2 • comment • Reads 355

If there was a stranger in mountania I would ask him some questions and see if they were reasonable if they were reasonable answers I would treat him normally till I gain trust then I would be nice to him but if he was from another settlement that’s another story. If they are from a friendly settlement I would treat him nicely and give him food and shelter but if he was from an enemy settlement I would take him hostage. If he wanted to stay and I gained his trust I would allow him to live in mountania but if he was not trust worthy I would of course not allow him to live in our settlement or if he was from an enemy settlement like jafrican I would never allow him to live in our settlement and I am sure that my fellow villagers would agree. But if they were from an enemy settlement yet looked trust worthy I would ask him questions but only if he looked trust worthy.

Article posted February 22, 2012 at 11:34 AM GMT+2 • comment • Reads 355



JMK -- The Stranger in Jafrican

Article posted February 22, 2012 at 11:28 AM GMT+2 • comment • Reads 587

When a stranger came to our Jafrican country, we greeted and welcomed him with baskets of food and introduced to our land. He decided to stay since we were so humble and kind. By mid night he crept into our farm and tried to steal our crops but I noticed him walking to our farm so I fallowed him. When I saw ripping the vegetables from the ground knew it was the thief Nour from River Island. Before he ripped out another vegetable from the ground, I punched him and took him to the Jafrican jail.

Article posted February 22, 2012 at 11:28 AM GMT+2 • comment • Reads 587



NK -- Stranger in River Island

Article posted February 22, 2012 at 11:34 AM GMT+2 • comment • Reads 381

Jamil comes to our settlement. “I come in peace,” said Jamil. Then all of a sudden he brings out his gun and all his jafricans come from behind him with horses. The amazingly brave Nour pulls out his guns and kills all the jafricans. I kept Jamil as hostage. I put him in a very dark room. I asked him what he wanted from us he said nothing so I punched him, “ANSWER,” he said he came to take our food and crops because over at jafrican they all died. I went to the the common room and gave him some food, but I still punished him. He started crying and begging me to stop so I did and we made a deal to have a fight again.

Article posted February 22, 2012 at 11:34 AM GMT+2 • comment • Reads 381



SA -- A Stranger on River Island

Article posted February 22, 2012 at 11:34 AM GMT+2 • comment • Reads 395

I was having a nice day and I went to the beach. Suddenly I saw a man coming in a little boat. I began to run towards him and helped him up from the boat. The man looked like a normal man and he looked nice so I helped him. The man looked exhausted so I helped him up to our civilization.

When we came to our civilization I gave him some food and a blanket. I was curious about the stranger so I asked him where he came from. The man answered that he came from Thailand. I asked the man why he came to River Island in a boat. The man said that he boat he had been in sank and the only way to survive was to take a boat.

The man stayed in many days until he said that he needed to go home. The man thanked us a lot and went home.

Article posted February 22, 2012 at 11:34 AM GMT+2 • comment • Reads 395



GO -- Stranger in Settlement

Article posted February 22, 2012 at 11:35 AM GMT+2 • comment • Reads 389

“Who is that” I said “is it a.. a.. stranger!” When I saw him I didn’t know what to do. When he got closer, I got up from building and went to him.


                The first thing I did is examine him.  By examining him means that I will ask him questions. If he gets caught up with word than I will know that he is suspicious. I will even ask him if he is from another settlement. I will ask him how it is like and who are the members of the group. If starts to create stuff up, I will know he is lying .

                I will not be kind to him because if I don’t be kind to him, he will get scared and tell the truth. If he wants to stay, I will tell him to be kind to everyone. He will have to get a job and be helpful.

                That is what I will do if a stranger walks into our settlement.

               

Article posted February 22, 2012 at 11:35 AM GMT+2 • comment • Reads 389





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