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5A - January Expository Text (03/19/12)
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ML -- Having Fun in Ramlieh
Article posted May 23, 2012 at 01:56 PM GMT+2 •
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Every year we get to go on a field trip. And sometimes they are boring. But not this year! We had fun in Ramlieh.That’s why I want to go back.
In Ramlieh we got to spend the night with our friends. We each had a roommate. And some people where 4 in a room! We even played together at night. (Trying not to get caught.)
We also played in the snow! We had a ‘’snowball war’’ and we made a competition of “who has the best the best snowman. “We also tried to slide in the snow and we had races. When we tried to sit we would sink into the snow.
But the most fun was the rope course. Many students were afraid of having to try to balance on the ropes (while hanging) that are 15 meters above the ground. But fortunately I was not one of them. When we were up you could fell the slight breeze on your face and look at the view of the mountains.
Ramlieh was fun. We got to spend the night with friends, play in the snow, and try the rope course. That’s why I want to go back.
This is the product of a mini-lesson on how to write a solid expository text in less than an hour. Students were given the topic (Ramlieh Field Trip) and state their opinion about this topic. That would be the introduction. They then needed to come up with three facts that supported their opinion, these would be the 3 paragraphs in the body, and finally they would restate their opinion, followed by the 3 facts, and that would function as the conclusion.
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Article posted May 23, 2012 at 01:56 PM GMT+2 •
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YH -- Expository Text
Article posted March 19, 2012 at 09:57 AM GMT+2 •
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This Expository Text was written by Yasmina © January 2012, and focuses on the organizational aspects of an expository text
They are round and come in different colors they are un-useful and they just sit there. Some people may find them Beautiful but I personally think there horrendous they have no purpose! They make look gorgeous on some people or they may look ghostly. Have you figured out what it is?
Some people like to make fun of people with freckles. I don’t want to support that because I have freckles. No one has ever made fun of me because of my freckles. I think it’s rude! Some people have mega freckles and some people have one or two.
They range from red to brown – Topic of the year. I know it’s a silly topic but I find it kind of funny! I don’t know anyone who has ever made fun of freckles but if they did they would be salami. Pipi longstocking has freckles and they look adorable on her but not so much on me.
Freckles in a story mean fun but cute (Mischievous) and I think that right. There are probably a lot of book characters that have freckles and that fill me with pride! Most of my friends don’t have freckles but some of them do and that’s luck for them but not for meL. My teacher had freckles when she was little and they diminished. I wonder why? I think anyone can have freckle and it doesn’t depend on your background.
Basically I don’t like freckles and I think there is no use for them. Most of my family members have freckles not so much and not so little. I have freckles but my dad doesn’t not fair!
This is the product of a mini-lesson on how to write a solid expository text in less than an hour. Students had to pick a topic – any topic- and state their opinion about this topic. That would be the introduction. They then needed to come up with three facts that supported their opinion, these would be the 3 paragraphs in the body, and finally they would restate their opinion followed by the 3 facts, and that would function as the conclusion. This was their first attempt.
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Article posted March 19, 2012 at 09:57 AM GMT+2 •
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My name is Nadim, I am in grade 5 and I love sports. My favorite sports are soccer, rugby, American football, tennis, skiing, snowboarding, and all the sports you do on water. My favorite subjects are Math, PE, Art, and Science.
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