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Title: 5A - First Personal Narrative (10/18/11)
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CH -- The Worst Day Ever

Article posted October 26, 2011 at 03:02 PM GMT+2 • comment (2) • Reads 1804


The Worst Day Ever



An Assisted Personal Narrative by Celine © October 2011


 










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t was the most boring, dreadful, annoying, stupid summer holiday ever. Nothing to do, nothing to talk about, nothing to play with, NOTHING!!!! I was dying of boredom. I began to knock my head on the door. “EVERYBODY, I AM BORED!”(Well there wasn’t everybody, there was my brother).


Anyway, an idea popped into my head: to roller skate! I knew it was a boring idea, but I just did it. I slid one foot into the roller skate, then the other. Just in a minute I began to have just a little tiny fun. I decided to skate all around the world (house). I felt like creating an obstacle course. I started to feel floppy but I didn’t stop and I had no idea why. “Celine”, my brother called. “Yes,” I answered,” what do you want?” “Never mind”, he replied.  I was too busy thinking about what he was going to tell me for some reason when I glanced into the window and didn’t notice I was still skimming through the obstacle course I had made an hour ago. I slipped on my back and landed on my arm


I felt discomfort my arm was killing me! It felt as if it was the end of the world, my arm turned as bright as a tomato. It began to swell up I could see the big blue bruise appearing on my arm it was worthless to look at.


“Sami!” I screamed. My brother came running to me he helped me get up and I got ice and while two hours past my arm felt a little better


After all I learned that I should never be clumsy.


 

Article posted October 26, 2011 at 03:02 PM GMT+2 • comment (2) • Reads 1804



EE -- A Happy Christmas Day

Article posted October 31, 2011 at 11:16 AM GMT+2 • comment • Reads 689

 

An Unassisted Personal Narrative Written by your Elias © October 2011.










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y younger brother is excited because we’re in Canada and it’s Christmas Day and we celebrate at in my aunt’s house. I told him, “it’s not the the first Christmas you had in your life.” I wanted to kick him because he wouldn’t shut his mouth. I was excited because I would get presents but not that much. I wanted to get over it with it because I was tired because my brother woke me up at 5 a.m. The rest of the family hadn’t come yet because they were getting ready. We are standing outside waiting for them to arrive. We almost turned into ice. Finally we heard the engine of a car and it was them. My brother, my cousins and I went down stairs to the basement because there are tons of movies there. We watched five movies while the adults were talking. All of us were yawning and bored. I said, “who wants to eat KFC?” everybody replied, “let’s go before we sleep.” I went to ask my dad but he said “no because we’re going to have a family dinner.”


We all sat down at the table. It smelled so good I wanted to eat everything on the table. And we did. Afterwards we went the cinema. When we left, there was a bit of traffic but we made it on time. We bought popcorn and Pepsi. When the movie ended we returned to my aunt’s house and we found presents under the Christmas tree. There was a knock. It was a fake Santa with a bag filled with more presents.


     I felt happy because my mom had said, “When a Santa comes you can open your presents.” I couldn’t wait, and I was annoying my mom so after Santa left I opened my presents.


   After I opened my presents, my brother, my cousins, I, and everybody in the whole family was tired. We left for home. My brother and I we’re fighting because were trying to lie down but the car was small. Then we slept so my mom and my dad were relaxed. When we made it home, my dad had to carry my brother and I one at a time up to our beds. My mom was terrified because my dad was really weary. My dad made it but he immediately went to sleep. I was awake as soon as my dad put me on my bed. I wanted to eat more food so my mom made me a nutella sandwich, before she went to bed. Then I went to bed. . I thought it was the best Christmas ever.


 

Article posted October 31, 2011 at 11:16 AM GMT+2 • comment • Reads 689



MH -- The Terrible Accident

Article posted October 31, 2011 at 10:53 AM GMT+2 • comment • Reads 645



The Terrible Accident



An Assisted Personal Narrative Written by Mohamed © October 2011


“Ooga,” my baby brother said. It was the summer holidays. I was Spider Walking on the door frame in our mountain house in Bshamoun. It’s a move that will make you climb up on a door frame or 2 walls by using both hands and feet. My little brother thought it was so cool that he started copying me. He did it, while I started finishing my Lego masterpiece. “Don,” my baby brother said. It meant something like “I want to try Lego.” “NO!” I screamed at him. Suddenly, my baby brother charged like a bull, his face boiling red, into my Lego masterpiece, and CRASH!      


As my Lego masterpiece was destroyed, I was mad, and because I was mad, I went in the sitting room to jump from the chair to the floor. My dad was already there. “Don’t do it Mohamed, it is dangerous. You’ll break a bone, ’’my dad said. “No I won’t,” I replied. “I said get down!” he shouted. “No-, “and before I finished my sentence, KABOOM!


My wrist snapped, and it felt like a dagger was going through my hand. I hit the floor with a big crash.”OOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWW” I screamed bloody murder. I looked at my hand, it was all crooked.


My mom came because of my screaming and started crying her head off. My brother had no idea of what just happened. My dad drove me to the hospital, where they put my hand in a cast. It took 24 days to heal and I had to eat with my left hand. That day I learned to always listen to my parents, no matter what.

Article posted October 31, 2011 at 10:53 AM GMT+2 • comment • Reads 645



ML -- When I Stepped on Glass

Article posted October 31, 2011 at 10:57 AM GMT+2 • comment (2) • Reads 674

 



 


An Assisted Personal Narrative written by Meera © Oct 20011









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Used to stick the baby bottle in my mouth while watching my favorite TV show, Telitubies-, my brothers-both of them- my mom, and I now and then visit my grandma. My eldest brother Amin is a smart control freak, but he is a klutz (like the biggest klutz ever.) My other brother who is also older than me is kind of bright. He used to be very caring and protective of me and he used to love me so much. But that was the past maybe because I’m growing up, my mom; well she is the most caring mom you can ever get. My grandma is the sweetest grandma in the world, she has short brown hair and big, loving and caring blue eyes, she has a special perfume that she always wears, and she always smells like it, so does her house, And trust me if you smell it you feel like you’re in heaven. Speaking of her house it is really nice and is kind of big. She has a garden and THAT GARDEN IS HUGE=http:// Her garden is full of beautiful flowers and frogs (that’s another story) She has 4 rooms, (it’s the same house my mom lived in with her brother and sisters) the kitchen is the nearest to my grandmas room. My grandma’s room has a big glass door, she has three wooden closets and well a bed (of course) and a TV, well that’s pretty much it. The room that I usually sleep in is kind of big. There is a TV in there a wooden bed, the mattress is lumpy at the same time very comfortable and fluffy, and there are two small couches and big wooden closets. And the third room has a huge wooden closet and a big bed; well that’s pretty much it.

My family and I went to sleep at my grandma’s house for a week. On the fifth day I was very bored, and my mom felt bad for me so she wanted to do something to really surprise me, It was a Sunday afternoon all the shops were closed and we couldn’t go out to play in the burning hot sun the and that was not working at all so there was nothing to do. My mom got an   idea, she was going to fix the TV but she needed the control freak A.K.A Amin ‘Amin! Amin! Come telium I mean the TV is not going to work on its own! My mom hollered, but he was too busy drinking a glass of water in the kitchen. I was worried he was choking on the water and he’ll never put it down. He took a big breath and said, “Coming!!” He ran to the room my mom was in and he put the glass on the entrance of the room. In five minutes or so I heard my favorite song, Telitubies Dipsy, Lala, Tinkiwinki, po, say hello!

I ran to the room suddenly I heard a big crack, creaaaak! Then I felt excruciating pain going thru my foot “AHHH!” I let out the biggest scream I could.

I looked at the floor and all around me was blood, I thought my foot was half ripped off. I cried so much I felt like vomiting.in those few seconds, I felt like they were hours, everything around me was frozen in my mind.

 

After I went to the hospital, it took about three weeks to heel, and they wrapped my foot (in those three weeks I wasn’t allowed to walk) but I still have a scar on my foot. Since that day I never walked barefoot  again.

Article posted October 31, 2011 at 10:57 AM GMT+2 • comment (2) • Reads 674



DS -- Going To Dubai

Article posted November 14, 2011 at 09:40 AM GMT+2 • comment • Reads 934


Going To Dubai



An Aassisted Personal Narrative Written by Dan © October 2011


             I am standing between Borj Dubai   and a sky scraper!!!! It looks like it is 5,000 yard tall (not really). My dad said,” we are going to Atlantis!!”  My smile rises up to my face and I begin to scream my head off from happiness. By the time we get there it is 3:00 p.m. I put my foot down and say (“proudly Atlantis here I am”)!!J My baby sister Judy and I run to the gate. We wait for mom, dad, and the nanny. We go in and wait for my mom and dad to swim with the dolphins in the swimming pool.  


              When my mom and dad paid to go swim with the dolphins the people who works there said “You have to wait for one hour.” “Ok,” we said altogether, at least we will see the dolphin. 30 mins before we had to go in the water, they called us to watch a small movie about the dolphin. My mom was scared my sister would kick the dolphin. When we went to swim with the dolphin my sister did not kick the dolphin. She was nice to him. When the time was over we got pictures of me swimming with the dolphin then we went to the swimming park. Fell off the slide on my leg and I got a BIG scar.  “OUCH “!!! I said when I got out of the pool. My leg was all blood.


             It felt like I didn’t have a foot anymore. For the rest of the the day I couldn’t walk. My nanny had to carry me until we went to the hotel. When we went back we washed, then my sister wanted me to go with her to the kid’s center.  “I do not want to go with her,” I said “FINE I will go but I will sit and watch you play.”


            The last day of Dubai, we wanted to stay more because it was so fun! But we couldn’t because people took our room. When we went to the airport the plane got delayed for 2 hours. When 2 hours were over was done the plane didn’t move for another 30 mins. When it started to move I fell asleep. It was 3 hours from Dubai to Lebanon. It was 5 in the morning .I slept for 3 hour to get energy. When I opened my eyes the next day I saw Meera right next to me I jumped of bed and hugged her hard.

Article posted November 14, 2011 at 09:40 AM GMT+2 • comment • Reads 934



HAH -- The Biggest Candy Store Ever

Article posted November 30, 2011 at 03:06 PM GMT+2 • comment • Reads 894

The Biggest Candy Store Ever!
An Assisted Personal Narrative Written by Hani © October 2011
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thought I was in heaven! I mean every kid dreams of being where I was just then. The colors, the decorations and best of all… THE CANDY! I was in the biggest candy store in the world! There were guns with gumballs as bullets, and a Hersheys chocolate bar a meter long! I also saw lolly-pops the size of basketballs with gum inside! It was the best day in December vacation! (The next week we were leaving Dubai and moving to Beirut.) I walked all around and I found an ice cream bar in the shop! I took my time and looked at everything in the store. I got a trolley and threw in everything that looked good. There was enough candy to last me 6 whole life times! Everything was just amazing! I treasured every second of being there!
My mother, my sister and I, all split up and went to different sections of the store. Whatever I wanted I could get! Whenever I would put the candy in my trolley, it felt like I was holding bars of gold. I ran into my sister at the chocolate section. (She was going crazy!) I would have stayed and talked to her but it would have been too dangerous
I walked around for a while, and my mum and sister were nowhere to be found. It was scary! Oh, and yes, the shop WAS big enough for an eight year old child to get lost in!!!
I was terrified, I felt like I was stranded on an island all alone. I looked around almost crying, and then I ran away in search for my mum or my sister. A few seconds later I ran back to take my trolley with me. (The candy was too valuable to be left behind.) While I was running I hear little kids screaming and laughing. (“HAHAHA! HEHEHE!”) I also see kids walking around holding their mum and dad’s hands laughing together while I’m trying to FIND my mum!!!
I tried my best not to look week and terrified but it didn’t really work. (Because I was) I got to the jelly bean section and I found my mum with an employee standing next to her. She was asking the employee what every flavor was, and she would pull a lever and dump them into a bucket. (It’s what you’re supposed to do so I wasn’t embarrassed.) I ran up to her and hugged her as tight as possible. “MUM! I’m so glad I found you!” I cried. “Oh, you were lost?” she replied “YEAH!” I screamed. Hani, you know I would never leave without you! How about you go get the candy you want and I’ll meet you here in ten minutes. Okay?” She said. “Sure!” I replied. It took her a bit more than ten minutes to fill the basket with 100 different flavors of jelly beans, so I fetched my sister and we waited. (We waited impatiently but we still waited.)

Article posted November 30, 2011 at 03:06 PM GMT+2 • comment • Reads 894



YH -- The Hospital

Article posted October 31, 2011 at 06:35 PM GMT+2 • comment (4) • Reads 688


The Hospital


An Assisted Personal Narrative Written By Yasmina © October 2011


We are in a dull, scary unpleasant room waiting for results. I’m lying on a grey, hard which is meant to be a bed but no not a bed. Everyone is so tired that their eyes just shut and when someone, anyone, walks in they just magically open again. I’m trying to relax while my brother gives me the stare. I don’t know why? My mom is holding my hand and whispering to me and I find it so cute. I keep a smile on my face so that everyone knows that I’m okay, even if I did have time to talk it would waste my energy…I was thinking of school and what I would be doing right now if I was in there I was a bit bummed because I missed two weeks of school. At this moment all I wanted to do was get into my own bed and watch some T.V. but, no instead I’m in a hard rock bed with no T.V and everyone observing me . I just went through pain and now I can’t go to sleep! This was the worst, by far the worst day ever! Everyone got up and started chit-chatting while I was trying to sleep. The lights went on and the results were. The results were in , I had meningitis. After the results were in, the doctor said to me “don’t worry and please don’t panic!” I didn’t really know what was happening…


But the first question I asked was “Am I being admitted to the hospital”? They said “Yes only for 3 or 4 days.” I thought my life was over! So my dad and mom called the Insurance Company. Then my bother suggested my mom and him go home get my clothes, my toiletry stuff etc… And as my mom was leaving this evil wicked looking nurse came in with this gigantic, humongous big needle and she expected to put it through my skin too take a sample of my blood. She came closer and closer giving me the most evil look ever and she came up to me and said “Habbiti I need a sample of your blood” No way was I going to give my o positive blood to this wicked witch of the west and then suddenly I started to weep and she was about to stick a needle in my vain and then suddenly, I start to moan and cry and she just left the room. I was jumping with joy! 


Then this young sweet, funny man can in with the needle and he said politely “Please could I have your hand?” I was shaking I wasn’t sure if I trusted him and then I started to cry I thought he would get out but he didn’t and then I gave up he put a rubber sticky band on my arm and he counted down from 3.3-2-1 and the needle went in and out went my scream! I kept on looking I would scream even more was it over? Of course not then, he pulled out the humongous needle out! Ow I thought. Then I knew what it was time for Spine Lumbar the doctor came in with his kit and I was too scared to look but I knew what he was going to do basically he was going to get a needle and a tube and take liquid out from my stood back (ow).So he asked me to put my stomach against the wall and my back towards him. So I did what he asked and he applied this numbing cream so I won’t feel it, but believe me I felt it whenever he moved it felt like someone had stabbed you over and over again my mom right by me telling me you’re going to be fine, just fine. I kept on asking “is it over” they kept on saying “2 more minutes” but I knew it wasn’t over finally he said it was over and that I could relax until they came in to put me on I.V then I would be put in my room. So the wicked nurse came in and I asked her “will it hurt “tell a little girl that it wand boom it went in then this man came in then this man came in with a wheel chair and he was going to take me too my room he picked me up and put a mask over my mouth and we left felt humiliated leaving the room I wanted my mom when we got too the room my was there waiting for me I was pleased she was waiting nervously I came in they put me on the bed it was so uncomfortable comparing to my bed right next to me was my mom she was staying with me so I felt extra safe….The morning cam quick lots of visitors came to see me My best friend had called and said she was coming I was so happy finally a child coming to visit me. There was so much trouble letting her in but then finally she came in! I was so happy but she looked scared of me when the time she had to go she was just getting settled but anyway I was going home tomorrow.. The morning had come and the nurse came in she asked me if I could take your I.V out I said “Yes” she took it out I left I was pleased because I was out of there.. I learnt that hospitals are scary! 






 


 

Article posted October 31, 2011 at 06:35 PM GMT+2 • comment (4) • Reads 688



AD -- Accident

Article posted October 26, 2011 at 03:15 PM GMT+2 • comment (2) • Reads 786


Accident



An Assisted Personal Narrative Written by Aymen © October 2011


 I walked down the stairs. The loud noise of students talking filled my ears. The teacher in charge of dismissal called my name. The day ended as it had started, being driven to another location. I got out of the gate and walked with my driver. I could see cars parked and parents and drivers waiting for a child. I reached my car and found my brother, Ahmed (as usual) and his friend. I sat in the back seat. All was fine, until Ahmed got out of the passenger seat and moved to the driver’s seat.


 


Ahmed stepped on the gas pedal and went off. He drove carefully and smoothly and it kind of felt like my driver was driving. He glided down the street and made an easy right. He went on and on until he reached a U-turn. All of this could have been avoided if only he went to driving school and if my mother were in town. Anyway, he reached the U-turn and, well, took it. However there was another car going by. Ahmed drove on and the car made a small shake and our headlight clipped with the other car. And Ahmed, if you’re reading this, we live in reality, not in GTA.


The driver of the other car got out and started speaking in rapid Arabic. My brother and driver got out to talk and reason with the person who was about to erupt with anger. But it seemed he was contradicting them. My jaw dropped down in shock and a question that vibrated rapidly in my mind was, “What just happened?!”


We arrived home with the furious driver tailing us. Ahmed was in shock and fear. Well, in the end we paid about $200 for the guy’s car and I learned never to enter a car with my brother in the driver’s seat.


 

Article posted October 26, 2011 at 03:15 PM GMT+2 • comment (2) • Reads 786



MM -- The Lesson I Learned

Article posted October 18, 2011 at 03:03 PM GMT+2 • comment • Reads 703


The Lesson I Learned


An Assisted Personal Narrative Written by Mark © October 2011









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ur recess is taken on the roof of our school. That’s what happens when you are living in Beirut; a big phenomenal city with no greenery. I’m stuck on the roof with hardly anything to do. The soccer field takes up most of the space on the roof. The other games that are possible for you to play are tetherball, basketball, and other stuff. But you can also create a game from your mind. In the soccer field, we kids are kicking a medium weird looking ball. Most of the boys play soccer, because they enjoy it and its fun for them. It is occasional that a girl plays soccer. There is not much else to do. If only playing for a 20-minute block you’ve got to find yourself something to do. When you go back to your class, your face will be filled of black blotches caused by the rubber tiles. But you know soccer can be really dangerous.

So I was playing soccer. I wanted to be the goalkeeper. But first the person on duty had to put us in teams. I was in the beginning of the line, So the teacher put me in a team first.  I ran to get to the goal, so I could be the goalkeeper. I made it there, and the game began. The other team started with the ball. They passed the ball to each other and they scored a goal. Then we took the ball to the center of the field and passed the ball around our team, and finally we scored a goal.  The other team did the same. They took the ball to the center of the field, and immediately shot the ball and they succeeded. As we were passing the ball someone from the other team took the ball and shot it from the tip of his foot. But in soccer you  usually don't shoot the ball from the tip of your shoe. Anyways the shot was so strong. His foot kicked my ring finger and it snapped all the way back to the back of my hand. It snapped 180° degrees backwards.Bam! i hit the floor.

I could feel excruciating pain. I felt like I lost my hand. I thought I was about to die. I was rolling around holding my hand trying to make it feel better, but I couldn’t.

 I went to the nurse and She told me that I have to go to the hospital. So she called my mother. The doctor told me that I have to wrap my hand for three weeks. From that day on I learned not to be the a goalkeeper for a while.

Article posted October 18, 2011 at 03:03 PM GMT+2 • comment • Reads 703



RA -- A Bloody Bath

Article posted October 26, 2011 at 03:11 PM GMT+2 • comment • Reads 660


 


An Assisted Personal Narrative Written by Reem © October 2011

 









 



It was a Saturday night, nine o’clock and I was playing with my Barbies and a pencil case in the tub while my nanny was making me dinner. My mom usually lets me play in the bath. The water was warm and cozy, there was no foam though. My mom was cleaning her feet, she was sitting on the corner of the bath tub. While I was playing I asked my mom if she could take out a plastic piece from my pencil case. The plastic piece was in my metal pencil case stuck in the top right corner in the corner. She said yes, but she said that she had to get dressed first. However, when I was 8, I was not very patient so I decided to take it out myself.

 

I wanted to take out the plastic piece to use as a bus drivers seat so my Barbies could go to school. I took the glass piece out with my thumb then my thumb hit the edge of the place where the plastic piece was stuck in. Two seconds later I found myself sitting in a dark red colored bath. I looked at my thumb and it had a long deep wide cut carved in to it, it was so much agony! I decided to call my mom. I screamed “MOM”, she dropped her sweater and came running; she was just in the dressing room barely two meters away. When my mom came, the cut in my thumb was creating a bloody river. My mom, without even thinking, not even rinsing me, took me out of the bath. My towel was pink and had a Barbie on it.

 She wrapped my thumb in a tissue which had to be changed every minute to stop the bleeding. My nanny helped me get dressed. Then we rushed off to the hospital. I had to get stiches. From how scared I was praying in my head. My tears had now formed a river. My dad kept calling and getting mad at my mom because they had to go to the dinner, and my mom was about to burst out crying but didn’t and I didn’t want her to worry. My nanny even wanted to come because of how scared she was but my mom didn’t let her.

 After about an hour I ate dinner watched TV and played. My mom and dad came back five minutes later from when they left because the dinner was cancelled. After four weeks or more the stiches came loose and it took a week for the scars to heal. Then I learned to be patient and wait for my parents and not do actions from my head.

Article posted October 26, 2011 at 03:11 PM GMT+2 • comment • Reads 660



LH -- An Annoying and Hurtful Day

Article posted October 18, 2011 at 02:56 PM GMT+2 • comment (1) • Reads 700

 



An Annoying and Hurtful Day


An Assisted Personal Narrative Written by Layan © October 2011

 

Over the spring break, when I was 7 years old, my younger brother and I were playing catch in the lobby of my apartment building. My brother always chases me and be mean to me! The lobby in my building was spacious enough to run in. But it was also smaller than the lobby in a hotel. It was almost as big as my classroom but a bit larger. In the lobby were sitting my neighbors. Oh I almost forgot also the buildings security guard.

 

In the game there is a catcher and a runner. The catcher has to catch the runner and so the runner is out of the game. Although when there are more than two people playing the game the runner enters jail!!! But that particular day there was the only two of us! So we had to live with it for the day. We tried asking our friend neighbors but they said they were busy. Huh! So we were stuck playing alone.

Before we even started, my brother was going crazy, dancing up and down, turning, whirling and doing other crazy stuff. Frist of all I shouted, “STOP IT!” So he stopped.

 

       After that I said, “1, 2, 3, GOO“. I was wearing my slippery slippers, and my brother was going extra fast! Every time I try and go faster I slip!!!I kept tearing from the air that was coming into my eyes. I couldn’t stand it! My evil brother was laughing behind me!! “Stop it!” I scream. But he never listens. And my brother is still going madly fast. I started screaming and yelling, I was amazingly scared! After that I told him, “Pause game”, then he said,” OK you want to pause fine I’ll go the fastest I can.” I started roaring and saying, “No, no!” But he never stopped…

I kept tearing from the air that was coming into my eyes. I couldn’t stand it!!!! My evil brother was laughing behind my back!!!! “Stop it!” I screamed, but he just ignored.

 I started crying and whining and still, my brother was going faster than a cheetah! I ran into the lobby, the securities started looking at us astonishly as if we were monsters! My friend neighbors were laughing at me whenever I slip!!They are so mean. We ran back to the house…

I dashed into the house sobbing defingly! But my mum couldn’t hear me cry because she was she was cooking, in the massive kitchen and the door was closed and shut tight. OMG!! He was moving like an electric machine, I couldn’t make him stop!!!.... 

I ran into the wide corridor of my house, I was going so fast, and DJJJJJ!!! My little tiny finger slid under my leg… Crack!

               I felt and heard my tiny little bone crack , I felt the pain sliding into my vane and into my bone! The numbness filled my tiny finger, I couldn’t move it! I felt it pumping up and down, about 100 seconds a minute. My brother ran to my mum telling her what had happened. I started crying.                                                             

My mum came running. She started asking me what had happened, so I told her. She took me and hurried to the hospital, and I had a chip fracture in my pinky. I learnt my lesson to never wear, slippery slippers when I am running or playing catch, ever again!

Article posted October 18, 2011 at 02:56 PM GMT+2 • comment (1) • Reads 700



MN -- The Day I Had the Flu

Article posted October 26, 2011 at 03:17 PM GMT+2 • comment • Reads 734


The Day I Had the Flu



An Assisted Personal Narrative Written by Mohammed © October 2011












Once when I was in second grade it was Friday a weekend. I started to play with my pet turtle I put it back in its tank and then washed my hands but I didn’t wash them right because I was still young and didn’t know how to wash right then I started to feel dizzy, disgusted, and couldn’t stand up. And after that I told my mom I didn’t feel good and she had to take me to the hospital. We had to go with my aunt because she was taking my cousin to the hospital too. I started to get scared and feel cold. I wanted to stay home at my grandma’s house; we didn’t live in our real house because my dad was at a resort with his friends just for a few days .It was finally time to get in to the doctor’s office. I was nervous.

When I got in the doctor’s office with my mom the doctor said,” Hello, how may I help you? ” My mom said,” My son is sick and he’s been feeling weak today. ” The doctor took his stethoscope and started testing my breathing, and then he got one of those sticks –the ones that you hold popsicles with- and I opened my mouth. After that he said “Your son has to sleep in this building.” I was shocked my mom said “Are you fine with sleeping here?” No of course not I thought so then I thought again once I get to the room I need to rest to get out of this prisonlike building or else I’m going to eat not delicious food for two weeks.

But it wasn’t I was so sick I had to sleep in the hospital. When my mom took me to my room I sat in bed immediately. My mom was worried and then she called my aunt and told her to back home with my cousin. My cousin was didn’t get why I had to sleep in the hospital. And I was sweating and wondering what was going to happen to me. My heart was beating fast. I was curious what was going on in me. I could tell the doctor would come in with an injection in his hand and give me a shot. And I was scared of shots I didn’t like them ever since nursery. I wished I wasn’t even sick in the first place. Then my mom told me my dad was coming to see me. I was eager to see him, but it took quite a while and then I started to wonder how big this building was, because he didn’t come early.


My mom took me to the emergency room so the doctor can give me a shot. When the doctor finished my dad finally came but it was late so I had to sleep. I learned to always be careful when I washed my hands.




Article posted October 26, 2011 at 03:17 PM GMT+2 • comment • Reads 734




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My name is Nadim, I am in grade 5 and I love sports. My favorite sports are soccer, rugby, American football, tennis, skiing, snowboarding, and all the sports you do on water. My favorite subjects are Math, PE, Art, and Science.

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