04/02/13                                                                                                                           Hassan

About to Die!!!

Hello I am 20 ounce I am married. I have 3 kids 12 ounce the oldest 8 ounce the middle and 4 ounce the baby and my wife is 15 ounce. We live in K.F.C in New York. We lived here for 15 days and we are at the bottom of this thing and when we go out this weird transportation thing takes us somewhere but everyone goes some wear different and the rumors are to a mysterious place.

Yay it’s my turn to go! Wait no don’t take me alone. I am married and have 3 kids ether you take none of us or all! Well I do need a break. Wow this is awesome! It’s like a tour of the city for free. Why are we stopping were going in a dark chamber but who cares it has a 64 inch TV come on I have a 6 inch box TV. I was watching TV until I dozed off.

I was sleeping for 15 minutes until I heard the word band  then I woke up and was in a different place and then the same voice said 16 once and up will be banned I scream I am married and have 3 kids please. Then a miracle happened a voice said no it’s not my fault people are getting fat you can tell them to stop but you can’t ban it. Then I got thrown away and lived in a garbage can happily ever after.

I was reading the book Holes and diary of a wimpey kid . press on the link below to read my reveiw.

Holes 

Diary of a Wimpy Kid

Move out of my my way I want to see that huge thing. WOW that is awesome its huge round and moving with this huge thing behind it controlling it. Hundreds bees went to sting it and kill it but he wouldn’t die he would continue looking threw that thing. Finally he left I can go get some more food.

First boys are treated differently than girls because people think boys are stronger and smarter. That can be true but girls can also be stronger and smarter.  Even if you’re not smart that’s what school is for.     

Second I think it is unfair because all of the country’s that think boys should go to school are only making their country poorer. Because the girls live on that land but don’t earn money for their country. This will make their country a better place to live because there will be less crimes, because people need money and the country will be less poor just for making one small change.

So I think boys and girls should both go to school. Get the same amount of learning and go to school as long as boys do.

The Soccer Game

By Hassan

Last year my brother, his friends, and I played soccer at Hoops. I was feeling a bit nervous about playing with his friends. I was going to be goalie on his team and I thought if I let a goal in he would shout at me.

I thought they were going to make unfair teams, but they didn’t. There was a referee and he picked fair teams. My mom spoke to him and told him to put me on the same team as Mohammed. It was six on six. I started off being the goal keeper then they scored a goal and I was switched. My brother shouted at me and I felt embarrassed and angry with him. When I’m angry I play better. I scored a goal in the last 10 minutes. We had rented Hoops for 2 hours. I was very happy because it was 1-1 and now it was 2-1 so we won. They all jumped on me. I told my mom I scored because she was eating somewhere.

From 3C Personal Narratives