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The Foggy Lifesaver
Written By Zack Mutton
One late, misty night a tired, sleepy woman is listening to her favourite music. Her child is sound asleep in the back swaying side to side as his sleepy mum drives her lingering car on the steep, windy hill.
The mist gets much worse and the woman has to stop her car too frantically to work out the safest and quickest way home.
Finally she gets onto the motorway. She is desperate to be in bed safe and sound. Although she can hardly see in the fog, she remembers a graceful hill before her short, smart driveway.
The black slippery roads are just about deserted. She is driving in the speedy right hand lane. As she approaches the bottom of the hill, she makes her mind up to move into the slower left hand lane.
As she is crossing into the slower left hand lane, she hears a muffled voice. “GET BACK IN TO THE SPEEDY LANE!”
She ignores the voice but she is very puzzled. A minute later she hears the peculiar voice again like thunder... She does what she is told immediately. As she had just got into the fast lane she notices a broken down car with men trying to push it with all their might, trying to get the car off the road. SHE HAD JUST MISSED THE CAR!!!
As she starts to go down the hill safely, she realizes the radio is humming loudly. “Hmm I wonder if I did hear a voice...” mumbled the woman.
Article posted November 21, 2010 at 03:12 PM •
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Hi am I Zack. I am ten years old and my favourite sports are kaykaking and sking.