One Sunny Hot Day there was Ripwake sleeping. Then Suddenly Whiplash walks into Ripwake's House. She put poison in her to make her bleed. When Ripwake woke up and her nose was bleeding. Her nostels where wide open. Her lips where Shacking like bunny rabbits jumping. Then Whiplash walked in and then started fighting Ripwake. Whiplash has 3 whips and 6 guns. Ripwake can do all kind of flips and tricks. Then suddenly a flash of light made Whiplash good like Ripwake. Whiplash and Ripwake become best friends. Ripwake taught Whiplash all of her physical flips and tricks. One day they came to a Haunted House and meet a GHOST! Zoombies were chasing them. Vampires were trying to suck their blood. Then suddenly, crack! They both died.
By Georgia Rendall
2010 17th November.