tittle: The story of the all blacks

by: kevin boon

this book is a bout the history of the all blacks from ad 1823 to 2010. This fantastic book has picture's of the all blacks team in the good old days were camera  color was not invented yet. i reakoment this historec book too all those rugby fans. But even if you arn't a massive rugby fan you can still enjoy this book like me.

"It won't work!' cryed derek "my scientific calcuation's show that it will ." exclaimed john. "well lets find out..." replied derek. so they pulled the switch for the coffin style machine ...... buzz boob bob zap zig 5 minutes on... A cunfused chicken steped out and said "say hello to my little freind" and he pulled out a rusty spoon and he tryed to shoot them with the rusty tea spoon " I thinck we made a stupid chicken not a military chicken! "well we can't do it again."said derek."why not?" questioned john "because the chicken is destroying it with his spoon!" said derek "oh well ummmm....john had a questioned lokk on his face. They talk came to a dissision... to exterminate him or such. so they captured him and took him to his doom "no no arghhhhhh! " 

My target for writing is to proof read my work.What i thinck i should to complete my target is to all ways remember that target when i finish my work.i know i can complete my target if i perservere.