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Descriptive writing (11/05/09)
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Gavin B -- The African picture
Article posted November 5, 2009 at 04:23 PM GMT0 •
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I see the huge African tree swaying about. The grass is as tall as a mans leg. I see the sky that is as blue as a shiny sticker.
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Article posted November 5, 2009 at 04:23 PM GMT0 •
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Gavin B --
Article posted November 19, 2009 at 03:25 PM GMT0 •
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1. Yes,because they are a beautiful animal and they kill bad creatures. 2. We should have a place where wolves can do what ever they want because there an in dangered species. Wolves should get extinct when we get extinct. Humans and animals are practically the same thing so I think we should stay alive for the same amount of time.
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Article posted November 19, 2009 at 03:25 PM GMT0 •
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Abbey B -- Discriptive writing!!!
Article posted November 5, 2009 at 04:21 PM GMT0 •
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I see a tree that looks like it's in a dryed up desart. It might also to be more discriptive be in Africa. There are lots of little stubby bushes to and dirt. It made me think of a desart because there are no people there and it doesn't look like there is a lot of water and there not a lot of leaves and the leaves that are there are dryed up! Thats what I can see from the picture!
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Article posted November 5, 2009 at 04:21 PM GMT0 •
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Jon B -- amarican southwest
Article posted November 5, 2009 at 04:22 PM GMT0 •
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I see a tree that has a trunk that looks like a y and a really blue sky ,it looks like a grassy plane there are no animals on the plane but I do see some bushies.BY:Jon Boyko
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Article posted November 5, 2009 at 04:22 PM GMT0 •
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Jon B -- super pig
Article posted November 11, 2009 at 05:47 PM GMT0 •
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piggy was a pig but not a regalur pig he was a super pig.he had a Mustang and a sidekick named Phil he was a chicken.together they fought, crime one day they were walking when they heard a scream oh yeah Phil had a corvete back to the story they heard a scream they jumped into there cars off they went they tracked the scream on there scream detector in there cars finally they found the animal it was a duck it was stuck in some cement,they had to get a jackhammer to chisel a hole in the ground 2 hours later the duck was free another great rescue.
THE END
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Article posted November 11, 2009 at 05:47 PM GMT0 •
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Jon B -- november/11/09
Article posted November 11, 2009 at 05:48 PM GMT0 •
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Today we are finishing reading centers,then we are testing our knowledge also we learned about Veterans day.finally if we have enough time we will write about MYST.
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Article posted November 11, 2009 at 05:48 PM GMT0 •
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Jon B -- PIGGY VOLUME 2
Article posted November 12, 2009 at 05:44 PM GMT0 •
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PIGGY VOLUME 2
as you know piggy and bob saved phil from the cement.it was night time but the phone rang it was cat her purse foxy took it they jumped into action they got in there cars when they got to the crime scene cat told them foxy went to main street to his lair to see what is inside. once again they got into there cars later they got to his lair he was inside but the door was locked so they had to cut the hinges finally they got the door off its hinges foxy heard them but that door was the only door to escape he was trapped they caught and cat's purse was returned to her foxy was sent to jail.
THE END
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Article posted November 12, 2009 at 05:44 PM GMT0 •
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Jon B -- EVIL CHEESE
Article posted November 13, 2009 at 08:11 PM GMT0 •
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In the future a evil scientist was testing on a pice of cheese. He shot a lazor at it and it came alive.The cheese was also evil it was forty feet tall. It went around town destroying everything in its path, soon it came to a water tower it used its new super powers to brake it and drank all the water later he found a field a deer was happeliy grazing on the corn.He ate the deer whole.soon the police came to the cheese it ate the police cars whole too. They arrested the evil scientist they had to figure out how to take down the cheese.later they figured out how to take him down.since he was cheese they had to cut him apart. the evil scientist was so mad he tried to escape. He did
TO BE COUNTINUDED.....
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Article posted November 13, 2009 at 08:11 PM GMT0 •
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Jon B -- tanks
Article posted November 13, 2009 at 08:20 PM GMT0 •
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Article posted November 13, 2009 at 08:20 PM GMT0 •
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Jon B -- evil cheese 2
Article posted November 16, 2009 at 04:26 PM GMT0 •
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as you know the evil scentist escaped from the cop car.the cops tried to catch him but he stole a street bike and went at a ilegal 90 miles per hour the scientist zoomed to his lair and locked all the doors in his lair but the police had a really big pole to break the door down.the scientist hid in a secret tunnel built for people in the war to hide.they didn't find him but there dog did it started barking and the cops came back and caught him he said he was inasent but they didn't belive him.
THE END
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Article posted November 16, 2009 at 04:26 PM GMT0 •
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Jon B -- microbes
Article posted November 17, 2009 at 08:13 PM GMT0 •
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Once apon a time there was a microbe steped in a asid puddle and grew to 100,0000 it went on to destroy the town. it would of destroyed the town if it wernt for the police.they got 100,0000 dust mites to eat it.but all the microbe stuff made the dust mites bigger and bigger
TO BE COUNTINUED
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Article posted November 17, 2009 at 08:13 PM GMT0 •
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Jon B -- whonny
Article posted December 11, 2009 at 02:10 PM GMT0 •
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whonny the pig was a super hero,he could fly he had lazor and night vision.One day muck a evil spirit villain he took over whonny now muck had lazor and night vision. Everyone thought whonny turned evil so they had a meeting. They desided to run muck pretending to be whonny out of town.
TO BE COUNTINUED
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Article posted December 11, 2009 at 02:10 PM GMT0 •
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Jon B -- cheese the amazing cow
Article posted December 3, 2009 at 01:33 PM GMT0 •
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cheese the amazing cow was very talented he could pop his eyes out and put them back in he could drive a car with his feet driving and his hands onthe driving wheel.the last thing he could do was he could hold his breath for 9 minutes he was friends with Houdini thats how he could do all those things.
THE END
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Article posted December 3, 2009 at 01:33 PM GMT0 •
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Jon B -- the master cheese belt
Article posted December 10, 2009 at 03:59 PM GMT0 •
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the master cheese belt was a cabel it controled the whole world one day someone unpluged then stole it the world shut down all the plants died the suns fire went out and all the animals die to get it back the police had to get there police dogs they sniffed out the thief the police found his hideout.
TO BE COUNTINUED
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Article posted December 10, 2009 at 03:59 PM GMT0 •
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Jon B -- Sister says hi:)
Article posted December 10, 2009 at 11:46 PM GMT0 •
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I am Elizabeth Jon's sister that drives him crazy everyday.I am 11 in sixth grade.I like the redskins but they are doing terrible:(I hope your christmas/hanaka break is going to be great=http://!!Goodbye i will return don't worry.Hahahaha
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Article posted December 10, 2009 at 11:46 PM GMT0 •
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Jon B -- my wish list
Article posted December 10, 2009 at 11:57 PM GMT0 •
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- eletric scooter
- video camara
- skateboard
- abima a stuffed animal
- laptop
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Article posted December 10, 2009 at 11:57 PM GMT0 •
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Jon B -- candycane
Article posted December 18, 2009 at 02:13 PM GMT0 •
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once upon a time there was a candy cane it was named tim but there was a problem tim wanted to be a worm tim tried as hard as he could but he still wanted to be a worm so one day he decided he was going to be a worm named tim the 2nd a worm in diskise he dug a hole and lived happely ever after.
to be coutinued
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Article posted December 18, 2009 at 02:13 PM GMT0 •
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Jon B -- turtle
Article posted December 18, 2009 at 02:14 PM GMT0 •
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once apon a time there was a flying turtle he was not just a regalar turtle he was a super turtle.He had a submarine,jet,dirtbike,mustang and a speed boat.One day he was riding in his submarine and saw a partly buried pirate ship it was a really old one too.he got a broom and sweped all the sand off it was really broken and roted away he went inside imeditly he saw a treashure chest.
to be cointinued
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Article posted December 18, 2009 at 02:14 PM GMT0 •
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Connor C -- WHY WOLFS SHOULD BE PROTECTED
Article posted November 18, 2009 at 04:43 PM GMT0 •
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Wolfs should be protected. They are becoming endangered. They also could hurt people. They are beautiful creatures. Wolfs are also afraid of people. Another thing is that if we leave wolfs alone they'll leave us alone. Wolfs should be protected so these great animals don't have to go.
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Article posted November 18, 2009 at 04:43 PM GMT0 •
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Jamie D -- the tree place
Article posted November 5, 2009 at 04:20 PM GMT0 •
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I see a tree rising from the sky. I see bushes fluffy bushes and light blue and dark blue sky.The place lookes a little windey and its always light out my favorite part about it is that it always lookes like a cool place to live
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Article posted November 5, 2009 at 04:20 PM GMT0 •
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Jamie D -- Daily blogger
Article posted November 17, 2009 at 08:14 PM GMT0 •
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We up for recess the most popular one is soccer there is soccer and minos circle doge and play ground.So out of thoues soccer is the most popular and sharks and minos is the least favorit.Next we talked about fanticey and reality we took a quiz about that. Then we talked about are story we are reading it is wolfs they are cool.Next we did is centers we have the writhing center and the socel studeys center and the last one we have is the word study center that is my favorite.After that we are going to do my favorite part of the day the vido game it is called myst 3 and we have to exsplore this rockey i land all it is dry dry dry dry we are trying to figer out what this man is doing is this house there it is so cool and that was my day at school. Thank you for reading this. by Jamie D.
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Article posted November 17, 2009 at 08:14 PM GMT0 •
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Emma E -- the spider tree
Article posted November 5, 2009 at 04:23 PM GMT0 •
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In this picture I see a palm tree that would look spoky in the nigt . It twists and turns like a spider trying to capture a fly but the tree is trying to capture me but in some ways it looks so relaxing I would not want to see that in the night but after a stressful day it would feel great
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Article posted November 5, 2009 at 04:23 PM GMT0 •
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Ryan F -- distriktu pargrah
Article posted November 5, 2009 at 04:23 PM GMT0 •
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I see a tree as willd as a bill.Also a lite blow sky.I see a tall grass.Thats what i see.
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Article posted November 5, 2009 at 04:23 PM GMT0 •
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Ryan J -- The island writing
Article posted November 5, 2009 at 04:22 PM GMT0 •
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I see a very odd tree leaning with some leaves. Also I see tall grass. Plus I see lots of dirt patches. Also I see some trees in the background.
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Article posted November 5, 2009 at 04:22 PM GMT0 •
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Chase K -- What i see
Article posted November 5, 2009 at 04:21 PM GMT0 •
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I see a tree in the desert. it do not have much leaves. It is not fall in what i see because the leaves are not diffent colors. The leaves are green and I see someone in the back roud. Their is a little grass the grass looks like plants.
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Article posted November 5, 2009 at 04:21 PM GMT0 •
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Cole M -- the look of life
Article posted November 5, 2009 at 04:23 PM GMT0 •
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What I see in the picture is an old, crooked moldy tree that kinda looks like an african tree so its probaly an old crooked moldy african tree.
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Article posted November 5, 2009 at 04:23 PM GMT0 •
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Drew M -- wolfs sould be protected
Article posted November 19, 2009 at 03:30 PM GMT0 •
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We need to keep wolfs safe. Beacause they are endangerd and they are not doing anything to us. They help people by hurting bad animals. Wolfs are butieful creatchers. They should wild and free.!
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Article posted November 19, 2009 at 03:30 PM GMT0 •
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Patrick Q -- what I see
Article posted November 5, 2009 at 04:21 PM GMT0 •
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Wriht now i can see a vary big tree rite it has three branches it is huge. I can see a white thing in the backround.I can see that it has dry grass and it is in a vary big field. I can see a bounch of trees in the backround. It mihgt be in Africa.
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Article posted November 5, 2009 at 04:21 PM GMT0 •
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Narayan S -- A PICTURE OF A TREE!
Article posted November 5, 2009 at 04:21 PM GMT0 •
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There is a tree. It looks like the tree is in a southwest area. There is barely any clouds in the deserted sky. The tree is tilted to the right. The dirt on the ground is hard like rusty metal. The grass looks as though it's never been cut.
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Article posted November 5, 2009 at 04:21 PM GMT0 •
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Christina S -- A Tree Picture
Article posted November 5, 2009 at 04:22 PM GMT0 •
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I can see a man in the backround that is probly an explorer. I think that this picture takes place in Afrcia. I see a pretty funny looking tree and it is odd shaped. There is alot of grass and plants . The sky is very very blue. There is no animals in the picture. There is dirt on the ground everywhere.
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Article posted November 5, 2009 at 04:22 PM GMT0 •
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Chad V -- THE PICTURE.
Article posted November 5, 2009 at 04:22 PM GMT0 •
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In this pict. I see ,a dry grassy place. there is a crooded tree so I think it might be Afica. i allso know it might be Afica because the grass i see is real dry same with the tree. That means it is hot to iallso know it might be Afica because the dirt is dry to=http://=http://=http://=http://=http://=http://=http://=http://=http://=http://=http://=http://=http://=http://!!!!
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Article posted November 5, 2009 at 04:22 PM GMT0 •
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