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THE MAGGOLLIAN MYSTERY
Today I am trying to solve a mystery. The mystery is that somebody robbed 5 million dollars from Mrs. Maggollians mansion. Everybody said that I couldn’t. I tried to tell them that, just because I am a kid doesn’t mean I can’t solve a mystery. Oh I am sorry I haven’t told you my name yet. My name is Wes. Yes, it is a funny name, but I like it. My suspects are Mr. Maggollian, the people in the big black house a block away from my house, and the guy who broke out of jail. I have hit a dead end because one of my suspects have moved to a different town. I am only 8 years old ,so I can’t go out at night. The top detectives have already given up. Today I am going to Mrs. Maggollian’s house to ask her a few questions. Since I am her last chance she is letting me come in. While I was walking to her house I heard something in the busses. I stopped. Hello, I said. There was no answer. So I walked on keeping my eye’s peeled for anything behind me. When I got there, she opened the door and pushed me in and locked the door. Next time please come in the back. Ever since the crime, I didn’t want to go out side. O.K, lets get started. I am going to ask you a few questions. If you want me to stop just tell me. O.K, she said. The question is. Did you see this man or women? I only saw that he was very skinny. Did he say anything to you? Just one thing. Goodbye. Where was Mr. Maggolian at that time? I tried to call him on my cell, but he didn’t answer. Very interesting, I said. What did the police say? They said that whoever did it must of made a run for it. Do you mind if I look around? You can look anywhere, be careful the stairs are very slippery. I just mopped them. Why did you mop the floor? The criminal threw up on the stairs. He probably had a very bad cat allergy. Exzacly what I needed. I was looked around and found one clue. I was a single little thing. A piece of shoe lace. That did not help me that much. Then something caught my eye. The cellar door was wide open and had two holes in it. What I said. She looked too. We both went into the cellar. Mrs. Maggollian said that there was a safe full of the money in here. The police didn’t find anything in there except a small jack knife with a small emerald in the middle of its frame. I told her that if she new anything about the man or women, to tell me now. Because I was leaving, because I did not find what I needed the most.
chapter 2 Who did it?
I woke up in the middle of the night. I was very grumpy that I did not find much in Mrs. Maggollian’s house. Her house was more like a castle than a house. It was bigger than the white house! I went to my desk and put a magnify glass up to the shoe lace. Mrs. Maggollian didn’t say anything to him after he told her that it was her last chance. It was in the summer, so I didn’t have to go to school. I stayed up late and found out that the shoe lace was from a nike shoe. The size: 10s. Do you know how I did it? The computer of course! I have a computer in my room because I figured out a mystery and got so much money. I could buy an apple lap top. The sun was starting to rise and my big sister was getting up for her basketball practice. My big sis: Stevany, is so annoying. Well, anyway. Today I am going to interview a suspect. His name is Mr. Maggollian. He is my top suspect, because he is going to get a divorce with Mrs. Maggollian. Maggollian is her name.
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