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 Recount writing In the holadays I went to Ohopy with kerry and mummy. we had 6 huawis bogyboding. The wavs were awesome. Then we had 2 huawis in the sun. afta the beach we went to Bayfere to get Da a present. Mummy needed to go to Kmate to get a thye thins. I fand a Lego starwars kit. We went home and had quit atfanoon Holiday recount (reworked with teacher conferencing) I raced through the trees on my mountain bike. The bike is ddep blue and has a land of bright stripes. It sparkles like the ocean. Mum and I had just got into the forest. My mum is as talle as a car and has long dark hair. The trees looked like they touched the clouds and had millions of cicadas making lots of screeching sounds. Ahead of me some blinding light flashed through the trees. Suddenly muym and I are out of the forest and on the outskrts of Tauranga. Soon we will be nexet to the lake and on our way home. By now the track had got really bumpy. A huge jump cam up. I pedalled as fast as a cheater after its prey. I flew as I hit the jump. As I hit the ground I went flying off my seat and over the handlebars. Thud! I landed on the hard dirt. Just in front of us was the lake. We crossed a very busy highway. Mum and I hopped into the car where She gave me a hokey pokey icecrem. Below is my reflection on my writing
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