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I thing the parts is retelling becase you need to put a story into your own words because i think if its to long you may like to put in your words.Some times it will make it mean more sents.It also will make it better.Thats what i thinks inportn.
Article posted October 15, 2009 at 01:00 PM •
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Hey Laura, I agree with you. Writing telling a story in your own words makes the story even better.
Comment Posted on October 22, 2009 at 05:33 PM by
hey laura I was reading your blog and i loved it your a good thinker
Comment Posted on October 15, 2009 at 01:30 PM by
hay laura i think that you coud put a capal letter but you speeled very word riet.
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hi my name is laura. I have a dog she is a girl.i play soccer.I love ice cream.I love dogs.I love Justice the store.
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