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The River
The River
The river
Flows
The pebbles
Glitter in
The
Sun
The kids
Running and throwing
Pebbles
That jump
On
The river
The
Sweet
Laughter
The sweet
Smell
That can
Make you
Nothing
But
happy
Article posted April 29, 2009 at 06:22 AM •
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This is a very descriptive and sweet poem. I love the words glitter and pebbles. The mind images I am creating are about spring in the mountains. The sun is sneaking through the trees and there are children jumping in the creek. The pebbles sparkle and catch the light reflected from the sun. Thank you for my imagination adventure!
Comment Posted on May 10, 2009 at 04:16 AM by
Ms Branch

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