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Feel the pain, Open your hearts
In the year 2006,
I was in a completely different place,
All I saw was a bloody mess.
Kids were dying here,
and moms crying there.
I was reminiscing back, back on the old days to when we were happy little kids.
Kids were bleeding here,
and moms where shouting there.
One after the other leaving this world.
Peace turned into war,
Tears of joy turned into tears of sadness,
Skies turned into black charcoal,
Seas filled with bombs and corpses.
Every kid slept with tears and woke up with worry,
Parents loosing kids,
Kids loosing parents,
Peace was the word that was echoing in the air,
Stop the wars and the killing was echoing too,
Hard days,
Sad days,
Dark nights,
Cold nights,
Innocent kids,
Suffering parents,
Passing away every day.
Article posted January 29, 2009 at 02:07 AM •
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WOW! This poem is really good. I really liked your use of vocabulary and most importantly the meaning of your poem. 2006 was a tough year for all the people who were in Lebanon and this poem is very sincere and is written with good use of words.
Comment Posted on February 12, 2009 at 07:14 AM by
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