While the hunters were out hunting Caribou, My freind and I sat by the campfire. We told creepy stories until my freinfd told the story of the White Wolf. "It only comes at a full moon, but when it finds people, Their spirits emerge together. The man then becomes a wolf and must face living in the wild". he said in his most terrifying, dark voice. That night, when I was laying in my tent, Iheard a rustle in I the bushes. I sat up, too terrified to even speak. I grabbed my dad's rifle and went outside to investigate. When I aproached the bush,saw a white fluffy tail, I poked it. Then came out a terrified little racoon, he ran into the woods. I sighed with relief. Then I walked back to the campsite, But on the way I felt something was following me, something soft, It felt like........WOLF FUR!! I ran as fast as I could to The camp. I sat there talking and mumbling myself to sleep. The next night, my freind and I sat at the campfire. Whenever I heard a rustle in the bushes I jumped, almost scared to death. "Whats wrong, why are you so finicky?" my freind asked Quietly. I didn't say, I just walked back to my tent, ashamed of myself. Then when everyone was asleep, I ran outside and whispered"White wolf, If you want me to be a wolf,make your own destiny come true." Then The spirit finnaly appeared. I touched it's soft, firm fur. It looked up at me with it's Peircing,Yellow eyes. It's eyes seemed to glow in the pitch blackness. I looked away from it's eyes, they were too creepy to stare into. I whispered to myself "How do I get myself out of this mess?" I looked Into his peircing,yellow eyes and touched the top of it's head, It seemed to enjoy it, like..... a giant puppy or something. He heard a noise and then ran off into the woods. I noticed he had a golden necklace around his neck, the sign on the necklace made me curious. Years after that I had almost forgot my encounter with the Mysterious white wolf when my mom and dad suprised me with a small white dog. It's collar had the same print as the white wolf's necklace.... THE END
I am a student from Pennsylvania and i read your story and it was amazing! The way you get the reader hooked in is so cool because the reader wouldn't know what they were missing if they stopped reading! I also love all the suspense that led to the end of the story. Keep writing the awesome stories so I can comment more!
Comment Posted on May 7, 2009 at 11:33 AM by
Hey Corduroy, I am in 8th grade. I read your story about the white wolf and it was amazing. I liked in the end how you got a dog and its collar was the same print as the wolf's necklace. You have an excellent skill for writing and should definitley keep writing.I will try to read your stories more often.
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