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Once apon a time there was two people named Julia and Emily. They where very good friends. They loved to go horse back riding. They lived with their horses,cows,mom and dad. In the morning they had to milk the cows,feed the horse and make breakfast. They never got to go to into the town because they might get lost. Julia was happy her birthday was coming up soon. "I can't wait mom". said Julia. On her birthday she snuck into the town out of the back door. Her mom got wired. She called Julia's dad.''I can't find Julia''she said. They got worried. "I wonder if Julia is in the town"?thought Emily. Emily and Emily's mom and dad set off to find Julia. Julia was having the time of her life but she missed her family. She headed home. Emily was worried too she was scared that Julia would be gone forever. They did everything they could to find Julia. Julia got new shoes that where gold. Suddenly she was invisible! Now her mom,dad. and sister could not find her. She got worried.''I hope mom and dad will find me". Then she was visible. Then she saw Emily."hi Emily I missed you. I got new shoes for us". said Julia.''great'' said Emily. Then they saw mom and dad. They where overjoyed to see her. She even got to meet a new friend on there way home. They now can go in the town but with there mom and dads permission. They lived happily ever after.
Article posted December 8, 2008 at 12:51 PM •
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Comment Posted on January 18, 2009 at 08:56 PM by
Colleen, what a wonderful, imaginative story. You characters exhibit a wide range of emotions, that I was really taken back by their complexity and sensitivity. I love the twist of the gold shoes making her invisible and how she then becomes concerned. Do you plan to write more about the adventures of Julia and Emily? I would love to read about them again.
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My name is Colleen. My faveorite color is purple. I have a dog. It's name is Murphy. I am in second grade. I have brown hair. I have two brothers. I like school! My favortie subject in school is art. Bye Bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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