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I Hate That Fence!
“Oh no!” I yelled at the top of my lungs. I stated to shiver like I was naked in Antarctica. My brother’s favorite ball was tilting back and forth when it tilted a little too much to the right and plop, it landed right on top of an abandon house’s roof. Now I was really in trouble. Right then I heard my brother’s footsteps coming closer and closer.
One day my little brother and I were bored of playing Pac Man over and over again, when all of a sudden my nanny stepped into the room and suggested “why don’t you go outside and play some soccer or something”. Elli thought, at least it was better than nothing. So I stepped outside and then I saw it, it was like a festival of deflated soccer balls. I tried to find a good ball but I just couldn’t find any. After searching everywhere for a good ball I finally found one. It was like the lights of heavens above were shining on it. Then I noticed it was my big brothers ball and I’m not allowed to play with it because it was his favorite ball. Well he was at ASA so he probably wouldn’t even notice I took it. So I took it and started to play with it. After a while I tried to do a cool move and by accident I kicked the ball so high it flew over the fence! I knew then that I was really in trouble. Great, it gets even better, just then I realized my big brother was back from ASA and the next thing I knew I could feel a fist running through jaw. I could feel blood dripping down my little nose.
The next day my mom told me I had to buy him new ball.
Article posted November 12, 2008 at 12:38 AM •
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Your writing has great voice.
Comment Posted on December 12, 2008 at 06:40 AM by
marwan Grade 10
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