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The large sailboat tried to dock during the large thunderstorm. The sky was pitch black and the power was out. The ice-cold wind was blowing in our faces like a giant fan turned on full power. The rain was pouring down and was blowing horizontally , and it was almost impossible to see ten feet in front of you. We tried to use the radio but it wouldn’t work “ Get down!” yelled the captain as a large 10 foot wave came crashing into the boat and sent it spinning in circles. The boat was rocking like a baby’s cradle. The wires hummed in the wind. Our eyes were stinging from the salty water being splashed in our faces. We were all holding on for our lives as if we were hanging off a cliff. “Bang!” we heard a large roar echo through the harbour. Then we saw a large flash of light and felt the whole boat rattle. Some of the crew rushed up the stairs. The mast was broken. We had been hit by lightning.
Article posted October 26, 2008 at 01:05 PM •
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I didn't know it James, but your a pretty good writer. This story is very well writen. Got any other hidden skills?
Comment Posted on November 30, 2008 at 07:17 PM by
Zach
Don't. Just don't leave a cliffhanger. Did they sink? No?
Comment Posted on November 19, 2008 at 01:20 PM by
Angalee
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