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The spaceman and the monster
The green monster came over the hill. The big monster is hairy. It can’t run fast because it is too fat.
“Help!” shouted the spaceman. He tried to get away.
“Help! Help!”
The monster came after him. It waved its arms. It shouted and laughed.
“Don’t let it get me!” yelled the spaceman.
“Ha-ha-ha-ha,” went the monster.
The spaceman tripped and fell over.
The spaceman tripped over a rock. There was a cookie under the rock. The spaceman got up and ran, ran, ran, ran until he got to his spaceship. The monster ate the cookie.
Article posted October 22, 2008 at 02:32 PM •
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Hi! that monster was probably enjoying that cookie while the spaceman was escaping! Is the monster a junk food eater because I think the spaceman was a healthy eater.And I wouldn't eat a cookie off of the ground!
Comment Posted on December 15, 2008 at 10:13 AM by
Brianna


Your idea of the monster being interested in the cookie not the spaceman is a great one. We were able to use that idea to write our shared class story. Thanks Annalise.
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Miss Knight
Comment Posted on November 1, 2008 at 04:10 AM by
Miss Knight

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