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This Is The Moment Poem
Right now I am at school, in Rm 2.
I see 2 people, one a classmate and one the teacher.
I see the screen at the top of the classroom.
I hear loud, loud voices that never stop talking. WHEN WILL IT END!!!
I smell the fresh air coming in threw the outside window that is open.
I taste nothing. Nothing at all.
I can feel my paper and my pencil.
Article posted April 14, 2008 at 03:54 PM •
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i like how you even included that the voices were loud and would never stop
Comment Posted on April 17, 2008 at 02:09 PM by
Cara is the mother of the slugs in the chaperone play!
Comment Posted on April 15, 2008 at 10:26 PM by
my favorite was Cara!
Comment Posted on April 15, 2008 at 01:10 PM by
I like that you put in so much voice in the "WHEN WILL IT END" phrase! That's a really good description of our classroom!
Love Prof. McG
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