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tom and jerry
Once upon a time there was a mouse. He lived in a bucket and his sister lived behind a spade in a garden shed. But someone left the door open and the cat came in. The mouse had to go round some rakes to visit his sister.
The mouse turned the corner of the rakes and froze in fear when he saw a large face right in front of him. Two large, yellow eyes stared at him and when he saw long whiskers on each side of the face he realized he was face to face with a cat. That was not a sight the little mouse wanted to see. The cat was so fluffy the mouse could feel the fluff from her a quarter of a metre away.
But the mouse knew its way and so it ran around a rake and a bucket and a wheelbarrow. The cat skidded around the corners and finally the little mouse lost the cat and ran away to the spade where his sister lived.
Brett
Article posted August 12, 2007 at 04:14 PM •
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I love the setting of your story and the way you used the garden tools as part of the setting and action.
Comment Posted on October 10, 2007 at 03:49 AM by
Miss Knight

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