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1) What I liked was how he did the articles about the caribou. It was some funny and some really serious. Also I liked how they put pictures in so you could see a lot of Physical Characteristics.
2) What I learned from it was that caribou when they are pregnant they have not one but at least four babies. I think that is a lot of babies.
3) What I found interesting was that caribou only eat plants not other animals. I thought that they ate other animals because of their big horns.
4) The changes that I would make would be to write more and make it so that people could understand more of your writing. Also they should have some pictures on the pages not on one only page and the page have a lot of pictures that don't even make sense to me.
Article posted May 7, 2007 at 11:23 AM •
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You put a lot of detail but you only did 4 facts that is poor you need about 4 more facts to do.
Comment Posted on May 9, 2007 at 10:04 AM by
I liked that you weren't saying exactly what he was saying like not copying and pasting his words. Another thing that I like about your blog is that you are giving him lots of compliments and I think that if he could see that then he would feel proud of himself. good job!
Comment Posted on May 8, 2007 at 10:16 AM by
Making the writing long and neat is important to get a good grade.
Comment Posted on May 8, 2007 at 10:09 AM by
i liked the way you numbered your comments and the way you had a lot of detail
Comment Posted on May 8, 2007 at 10:06 AM by
I think that you have a good point with your you did a good job.You had said a lot about your person that you had read about good job!
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Comment Posted on May 8, 2007 at 09:59 AM by
I think that you and hgymnast have the same point that people should try harder and really put good better best to good use. I also didn't know that caribou have at least four babies. That is a lot for a mammal.
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