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I just read Tiffany’s blog about her holiday and I really enjoyed it. I really enjoyed it because I really like how she tells the important parts not the details. When she says” On holiday,I went to Nanjing with my family. On the train there I read a book called . My brother was sleeping on the train. After we arrived,we went to the hotel and unpacked our luggage. Then we went to my grandparent’s house. We ate dinner together and watched TV together. Later we went back to hotel and slept.” she only explained the important parts not the details. I could connect to a time I had a Holiday. July 4th
“BOOM.” I jumped in excitement. “DAD COULD WE GO TO CIRCLE PARK TO SEE THE FIREWORK!” I yelled. “Ok.” my dad replied. We all ran to the park. “BOOM!” As we ran we saw a trillions of people. Under my voice I said “ move it people little guy coming through.” I ran and saw millions of lights.
“ dad next year could we do fireworks”
I watch as the fireworks lighted the sky. We watched as our eyes grew wider and wider. The fireworks were like jumping stars exploding into beautiful light. The lights started to fade, everyone went home. We all went home and had the best dream ever.
Article posted May 9, 2012 at 06:57 PM •
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I really liked your blog, Anshul! It is really interesting. Loved reading your blog!
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