Jack’s 5 grade blog persuasive essay Hi! my name is Tommy. I just looked at Jack’s blog talking about why kids should not wear school uniforms. I enjoyed Jack’s essay because he put in so many reasons why kids do not have to wear school uniforms. I noticed that he worked very hard on his essay to make his point heard.I agree that people should not have to wear school uniforms. I think that Jack’s essay was great because, Jack used great reasons like the suits cost a lot of money. In the 4th paragraph he also put in that the suits are itchy because they are made of “80% cotton and 20% polyester.’’ The last thing that Jack put in was that some people said “the suits make you look cool’’ he commented the suits are a boring color like red, yellow, and black. Some kids said “the suits make you look cool so you won’t get bullied.’’ “He responded but people wear the suits in a weird way.” I agree that people should not have to wear school uniforms. I think that Jack’s essay was great because, Jack used great reasons like the suits cost a lot of money. In the 4th paragraph he also put in that the suits are itchy because they are made of “80% cotton and 20% polyester.’’ The last thing that Jack put in was that some people said “the suits make you look cool’’ he commented the suits are a boring color like red, yellow, and black. Some kids said “the suits make you look cool so you won’t get bullied.’’ “He responded but people wear the suits in a weird way.” Jack’s story brought back a memory to me of when I was at my first baseball game and wondered why people would by those shirts for so much money. Later I noticed when I got older that these were team jerseys but I still thought that they cost a lot of money.