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What's love without trust? trust without love? Nothing. Nothing at all.
It was nothing.
She knew it was bound to happen sooner or later.
As those 4 DREADFUL words came out of his mouth.
It filled her ears with sadness.
She held back her painful tears that were hidden behind her mascara.
When she walked away from him knowing it would be the last time she saw his beautiful face.
The tears came down hers like a rapid rain storm.
People saw, and people walked right on by.
It was the ones that cheered her up who lightened her mood.
But deep deep down inside she felt lonely and hated.
He betrayed her for some model type.
Blonde haired beauty.
But beneath her surface it was rotten to the core.
He was infatuated with her looks.
what a jerk.
What was she thinking going after someone like that.
She deserves better.
Article posted May 9, 2012 at 10:43 AM •
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oh dear dear dear! I love your writing. You are just aaamazing. Thid id wonderful. This poem is so lovely,
Comment Posted on May 30, 2012 at 10:43 AM by
Karly, I can tell this poem had a lot of effort and thinking into it. I know this year hasn't been the best for you but me and a lot of other people are here for you.
Comment Posted on May 28, 2012 at 06:01 PM by
Karly, this is deep... it means a lot... I like the thought and effort you put into this.
Comment Posted on May 23, 2012 at 07:40 AM by
Karly, I really like this blog because I can relate to some of the feelings you described. Also you have a very good style of writing.
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