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A Visit to BrainPop 06/12
Blog Connections 05/08
Bud, Not Buddy 02/29
Free Blog Inspired by David Adler 01/25
Hopes and Dreams Part 2 12/18
Science in Action 11/10
Personal Narratives 10/18
7 Random Facts 09/18
Hopes and Dreams 2011-2012 09/07

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6/17 Brainpop studios
5/15 Blog Connections
4/26 New York
3/15 Bud, Not Buddy
1/31 How to play foot ball
1/8 Cole’s goals for 4th grade.
11/28 Panthers : Science In Action
10/25 The Time I Went To The Beach With My Uncle
9/23 7 Random Facts
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New York

 


New York

 

I am Cole. I live on Long Island, New York. I have gone to many places in my life but I am just going to tell you about three of them. There are so many super fun places to go to in New York City, there is Time square where the ball drops on New Years Eve and the big Christmas tree is there. Also love going to Broadway and watching Annie, Mary Poppins, and The Lion King. F.Y.I. great Broadway plays. And last but not least the biggest toy store that includes a Ferris wheel.



    Time Square is a super fun place it is only like, 15- 20 minutes away. Every year everyone on the earth likes to watch it on live TV. And half of those people come to see it from all over the world. I beg my parents every year to go and see it since I was six, not just for the ball dropping there is also great music performances. And for grown- ups there is bars and clubs. If you lived as close as me to time square you would always go to time square to see the ball drop, but my parents don't take me. In time square there is also the biggest Christmas tree in the world which is so cool I have been there but not to see the ball drop.



       



        Broadway has great actors that put on great plays. I have seen Lion king and Annie on Broadway.

There are so many people there and the actors must like watching the shows because they know what they have to do. They must be confident to perform in front of so many people watching. If you want to be an actor in New York your dream is to be on Broadway. When I went to see a Broadway play there was so many people at the watching I almost felt bad for the actors if they messed up they would get so embarrassed. Broadway is big in New York.

    The biggest toy store ever- in time square there is a toys “R” us that is huge it is like three regular toys “R” us’ in one. There are 3 floors the very top floor is all Barbie and different types of other dolls. My sister loves that section, on the second floor it is wily wonk’s factory, and last but not least on the bottom floor there is electronics, and what am I forgetting yeah the huge Farris wheel in the middle of everything. I went and I got a Mr. and Mrs. Potato head it was so much fun. While you are in their, employees are supposed to let people try helicopters they are amazing when I go there I always want one but my parents say no [ if you have not noticed my parents say no about a lot of things I want]. Anyway while you are walking around, you see the helicopters flying around. New York is a great place I am so glad I am here.  































































Article posted April 26, 2012 at 09:48 AM • comment (6) • Reads 294 • Return to Blog List

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I like how you gave a lot of information about toys r us. I have read a few articles of yours and you are a very good writer and tell your parents they should let you go see the ball drop it is very cool i watched it on tv
Comment Posted on May 17, 2012 at 02:02 PM by logans


This was a cool piece,aside from some minor spelling mistakes,i liked it.
Comment Posted on May 1, 2012 at 12:49 PM by sitaa


You are a very good writer!!! I always wanted to go to New York! It sounds amazing. You know, Chicago is just as great as well. I loved time square and toys "R" us sounds amazing and really fun.
Comment Posted on May 1, 2012 at 11:22 AM by milonis


Times Square sounds really fun.I've been to New York before too. I've been to the store with the ferris wheel, it was really fun. I watch the ball dropping on New Years every year on TV. I like New York a lot too.
Comment Posted on May 1, 2012 at 11:19 AM by Akhila A.


Hey cole. I really enjoyed reading your piece. This summer I am going to new york, and now I want to go there sooner!
Comment Posted on May 1, 2012 at 10:33 AM by Aliw


New York already sounded like a fun place to go, but now your writing has made me want to travel there even more! Great writing Cole!
Comment Posted on May 1, 2012 at 10:31 AM by Jared

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