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She Was Sixteen April Free Write
"She Was Sixteen"
By: Julia Doyle


I wrote this poem because there’s a song called, "Sixteen" and it made me think. I came up with this because all I know to the words of the song is, "She was sixteen." I thought I would try and write something like it and more inspired.

"She Was Sixteen"
By: Julia Doyle
She was sixteen
Filled with dreams
Had a mind of her
Own that nobody
Could stop
She knew what
She wanted
She knew were
She was going
She was just sixteen
But had it all planned
Out
She was
Ready
Ready for anything
She had spunk
And flare
She had her wild thoughts
She was outgoing and
Care free

Article posted April 20, 2012 at 12:49 PM • comment (6) • Reads 563 • Return to Blog List

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Awesome poem Julia. I loved every line of it. Keep it up you might be a writer one day. XD
Comment Posted on May 23, 2012 at 08:00 AM by Jamon C
Awesome poem. I like how you think of these great poems.
Comment Posted on May 16, 2012 at 02:36 PM by Ryan K
Jul, this song reminds me A LOT of you. Your such a bright and creative person!
Comment Posted on May 4, 2012 at 10:29 AM by Briana D
Julia your blog was good. I know that there is a song about she was sixteen bult yours was better.
Comment Posted on May 4, 2012 at 06:33 AM by Ashley S
Julia your blog was good. I know that there is a song about she was sixteen bult yours was better.
Comment Posted on May 4, 2012 at 06:33 AM by Ashley S
Hey Julia I like that poem. Good job I think it related to everyones everyday life.
Comment Posted on May 4, 2012 at 06:32 AM by Hailey B


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