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For the writing variables’ assignment I chose the article cold (Mom Booted Off Of Buss Because Of Noisy Toddler.) The writing variables I changed was Audience, Main idea, Context and Form,. Everyone except for (Purpose.) I changed it from an article to a letter to someone. I chose to change it to a letter because by writing it as a letter I was able to explain how the mothers point of view of the whole situation was because I believe that the article was trying to say that it was not fair that the mother got kicked off the bus. But the article was not fully getting across what it would be like in the mothers shoes. But by righting it as a letter I was able to fully describe what it was like for her and how she felt. I changed the writing variables and language to describe how she felt.

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