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 Suicide I woke up to the smell of wet dog. I opened my eyes, and looked around. Trees, trees, trees. Yet, only one tree was glowing brightly towards me. No sign of any kind of canine- I spoke too soon. There stood the most gorgeous kind of dog, standing fiercely under the beautiful golden tree. I sat there unable to move or speak. It seems the wolf wasn’t going to budge if I didn’t stop staring. I looked away, and then I looked back. She was gone. I looked everywhere, but there was no sign of that fortune bringing wolf. Fortunately, after a few minutes, I was able to stand on my feet, without feeling a whole lot of pain. I stood up and thought of returning back to school since there was half an hour left. As I trotted my way back to torture, I heard a horrifying scream. Dylan. Dylan Sanders is a boy at my school who LOVES joking around. I ran to see what the sound was all about. There lay the body of a boy who once was hilarious - lifeless. I stopped breathing. I didn’t know what to do, so I just stood there. Until there was the bell. I decided that if I wanted to figure out this mystery, I would have to be a detective. Detective Clarissa. As I looked around, I wondered if there would be an unexpected clue. Although my hopes were a fail, all that I found were leaves, trees, and that one tree that was glowing brightly. Unless, I thought, there might have been a reasonable hint there. As I made my way to the tree, the same beautiful wolf ran my way. I tripped and fell over an unusual rock that was so fragile it hatched into three pieces. The inside was enchanted with sapphire and pink jewels. It amazed me how my body was perfectly fine and not one thing stuck to my tanned skin. The wolf stopped and signaled me to follow her. She led me to the golden tree and pushed a 9 inch knife my way. That was one clue. At one point, I thought the wolf was the murderer and I was the next victim. That is until I spotted the initials on the tip of the utensil that shocked me. The initials were D.S. I wasn’t so sure what that got me to, but I had a feeling that I needed another clue. It seems the wolf understood and she led me another way. This time it was closer to the tree. She pushed me a golden apple, but this apple was not edible. It also had the initials of D.S. I understood the story now. When I was screaming to death for help, I heard voices. It was Terry bullying Dylan. Terry was a very bad person. He was going to be a murder when he grows up. He threatened Dylan that if he doesn’t listen to him he will kill Dylan. Dylan tried everything to kill himself before Terry would, but there was only one solution. To stab himself with a knife. I figured this out not because of what I heard, but also because of his complaints to principle Mainy, I heard while eavesdropping. Suicide. Article posted April 2, 2012 at 09:53 AM • comment (3) • Reads 85 • Return to Blog List Add a CommentPosted Comments  WOW that was a really good story, I agree with Madison there should be a part two!
Comment Posted on April 4, 2012 at 10:05 AM by
KristinaYour story is sooooooo interesting. I LOVE IT! Write a part 2 someday! Please do! love it Rama , you're an awesome writer. TERRIFIC!!!!! - Maddie
Comment Posted on April 2, 2012 at 10:14 AM by
MadisonWOW THAT WAS AMAZING!
Comment Posted on April 2, 2012 at 10:11 AM by
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