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I have a Mum and a Dad, and a brother. My brother is 10. I have a cat and his name is Tazzycat. We like to go out for dinner and we like to play with Tazzycat. We like to go skiing. My brother's name is Josh and we like to play with the army men. We like to play shooting. We like to play ice hockey and we like to ice-skate.
Article posted March 31, 2012 at 08:27 PM •
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Great story Logan. I like the three verbs you used in that story, they were ice skate, skiing and hockey. To improve your writing you could write some adjectives and some more verbs.
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