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March Freewrite

written by me

Ever thought what it would be like to be alone, lost, and hopeless?
Having a ticking timb-bomb in your hand. If you dont mind? Would you bury my corps in the sand..

Watch as the boat sinks in the middle of the ocean.
Watch as the captain takes his last breath.
Watch as this poor ship drowns in this ocean.
All the sorrow with its madness.
A recipe for forgiveness?
Lying flat on the ground of the sea.
Watching the last of his air vanishes as it hits the ocean’s surface.
Leaving nothing but water.
Given up waiting for his savior.
Given up on hope.
Given up on his dreams.
Watch as the sharks swim toward the wreck.
Watch as they turn towards the lonesome captian.
Watch as the sharks rip my body apart.
The blood going through the water.
Like food dye in your glass.
Watch as the chunks of his flesh get swallowed by the blood thirsty sharks.
Watch as no one will realize that he is lost at sea.
Swimming with the fishes..
Article posted March 28, 2012 at 07:45 PM • comment (4) • Reads 40 • Return to Blog List
 
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Awsome poem Brandon, it's very well writen, keep it up.
Posted April 22, 2012 at 12:48 PM by • Benjamin T
Posted April 22, 2012 at 12:48 PM by • Benjamin T
Brandon you are a amazing writer. Also I love the words you use, it makes it feel real. (:
Posted April 16, 2012 at 05:54 PM by • Alicia
Posted April 16, 2012 at 05:54 PM by • Alicia
This is a very good poem Brandon, it was well written, I like the topic and descriptive words you used. Nice job :)
Posted April 12, 2012 at 09:06 PM by • Kelly S
Posted April 12, 2012 at 09:06 PM by • Kelly S
Brandon, I like this a lot. You have a very creative mind.(:
Posted April 2, 2012 at 08:47 AM by • Shania M
Posted April 2, 2012 at 08:47 AM by • Shania M
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